WarCraft - Anub'arak

[criz]

the original lineart is back from August '03, and when browsing through my old drawings the other day I thought I should give this guy another try

when using this 'edgy' style I do the lineart with Freehand, then go ahead and color it in Photoshop

however, I don't use it as often as I'd like, so feel free to point out where I could & should improve

aside from one of my most obvious problems:
the fact that I can't decide where exactky the light should come from *rolls eyes at self*

Anub'arak is a character from Blizzard's WarCraft III add on 'The Frozen Throne' hence © Blizzard

[Doomgriever]

reminds me of the crawler from Star Craft... anyways its really hard to see what going on 0_O... thats all i can say. but i like your posterized kind of shading ^_^

[Camara]

I can´t see nothing!!!!!!!Well,I can´t see nothing until i´ve been looking at it for some seconds.You need more canvas,more space betwen things in tha composition...and the palette i think should have more variety.

Cheers!

[Olof]

Crawler? wtf..

You need to clear things up here. I believe your colours aren't telling us anything about shape nor position, but I think your biggest problem lies in your lineart. You probably should try some perspective practice and then hit this action pose again..

Good Luck!

.peace

[JL.Alfaro]

what is it again? not entirely visible, or viewable. got a ref pic?

[criz]

thanks for the hint,
I guess this can really be confusing if you don't know this unit and the actions

as for reference, here's a link to blizzard's site about the Crypt Lord