First tablet/mouse/pencil

[Artox]

I drew this on a sheet of paper, then scanned it started colouring it with the mouse and when I bought a tablet I finished it.
I'll be glad to get some critics on that no matter how bad you think it is, but don't make me commit suicide, pls

[Jonah]

Nice, concept, though the muscles on the legs should be the same on each size as they are in the similar, if not the same position. Also the lighting seems very sporadic. Its coming from all different directions. Try working as if the light is coming from one direction only. Finally, always add a description of background other then white as it messes with the say the eye sees colour.

[Artox]

Thanks, I'll work on the lightning and the background.

[JasonUK]

i agree with the lighting. I would also say try to leave out the blacklines on the torso and arms and try using harder brush edges. Also attention to detail in some places. I guess the face is the focal point so that should have the most detail which it doesn't. What about the background. Add a rough textured back ground, nothing detailed. it would make the image look better. I think anyway. i'm no expert and am still learning like you.