Muse of Bloody Swearing
Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
dinosaurs are cooL!
that last one looks very good, nice compositon, nice everything!
aboutthe colors, i know i'm no expert, but try getting rid of the lines completely to avoid the "color by numbers" effect, use big brushes to scupt form without using lines, but value contrast.
keep 'em cominG!
ciao
Registered User
Level 10 Gladiator: Equites
really like this one...more ships man!
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1198032842
a.d.d.d (attention deficit drawing disorder)
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
cool, Ill post the colored version in my sb. Ill let you know when its done. Merry Christmas too!
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Bolo - Thanks!
Gnoll - Thanks for the painting tip; it will be hard for me to think without lines...but I'll experiment
Dan - Heh thanks; I'll mess with some more...
OBX - Looking forward to it
Couple doodles with the wacom; trying to get used to just drawing straight onto it; don't know if I really like it yet.
Registered User
Level 10 Gladiator: Equites
yeah its hard at the begining...but u have to practice man!....anyway u r doin' fine!
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Heh thanks Dan
More wacom drawing
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
slghjk
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
More wacom sketchery
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
(moved down/added to cowboy
Last edited by Discoskull; December 27th, 2007 at 02:43 PM.
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
For some reason, when I'm up late at night, I draw fucked up little murder comics.
Sorry...
But you're right; I should've waited for Valentine's Day.
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Muse of Bloody Swearing
Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
that cowboy just looks drunk and dirty not too dead (and watch out for the hands pose.
Really like the wacom drawings, your style is strong.To explain what i mean with "ditch" the lines, look at your "sketch2" in post 424...instead of using lines to separate the muscles, you use shadows and lights (in chunks) to define the form.
Awww i'm definately not the right guy to explain this.But do check out one ca's vieo tuts, like Jason Chan or Noxismad, really cool n quite cheap stuff
keep 'em coming!
(pssst, still waiting for that script of yours)
ciao
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Heh yeah I forgot to change the name of the jpeg; he is supposed to be wounded and super-dirty.
Thanks for pointing those out; I will now go and check them out...
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Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
The least complicated of 5 title pages/ covers (no worries, it's a working title)
Last edited by Discoskull; December 29th, 2007 at 01:11 AM.
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
eryerit
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Level 6 Gladiator: Provocator
Your art reminds me ALOT of Kweli's. (check him out on DA if you like)
The only suggestion I have is to watch your colours. Sometimes the choices you make completely overtake the lineart.
Hope to see more. Lats
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Checked out Kweli's stuff; supafun line work. I should mess with tribal/graffiti designs again...
Thanks for the tip on the colors; I've been trying to mute my pallet more lately.
Some pages; I have a 5-issue horror story scripted, and the first issue is thumbnailed/sketched into PS. I'm seeing how it turns out when I just draw everything straight into PS. Pip-pip. I could REALLY use one of those tablet PC screen things. One day...
Registered User
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hey man you are quite the story teller, nice composition and layout in these pages, keep at it!
Cheers
ViciousPineapples
Come, critique our art and help us grow!
the shotgun gaper
Level 6 Gladiator: Provocator
I love your style alot. Definitley a breath of fresh air in these areas!
My favourite must be your creature designs. Especially that winged-wolf-thingy!
Until next time!.gif ";)")
~B. Klarić
Cheap Artist!
Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
Nice style man, i really like your linework, it has a rough and brutal feeling to it that really stands out. I think you should try to give your coloring this feeling too, at this point your coloring looks very calm and and blurred. If it was rougher, i think it would look very nice with your lines.
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Buckster; thanks man! There are plenty more pages to do when eventuality rolls around...
Blaz; thanks for the kind words!
Carbono; thanks for the tips. I'm always looking for tips on color; I've only really started using it, and Photoshop, over the last year. Sounds like the rough application would go well with what the Gnoll was talking about a few posts up.
I'm only about 15% sure about the bloody stuff. Methinks I'll experiment some more.
Muse of Bloody Swearing
Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
cool stuff man!
i just LOVE those latest pages (can't help it, since i recently read an italian comic about zombies n cowboys "Uccidero' ancora Billy the kid")
and i like your take on the subject (nice storytellng and nice action in that last page)....
and sorry for talking about it again...but hell i'd love one of your scripts lol...
keep sharing!
ciao
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Thanks Gnoll!
It does seem like a zombie comic, but it'll turn out to be much different
I'll get on msn soon to talk about a script, yes indeed.
(Another late night poem-comic of the dark variety.)
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Dumptastic
I just got a new hardrive. Whooptie-tit.
The Inciting Incident is semi-complete.
I will have to go in and fix a couple things for consistency's sake, but boo hiss. I'll do it when I'm not dog-tired.
I won't be posting things quite so often for the next few weeks or so; I'm moving to Austin. Yay! Kick ass.
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Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
I just liked the way these looked "inked."
Muse of Bloody Swearing
Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
this is looking good man...has a bit of Hellblazer feel to it, and me likes.
wanna see how it goes on and...whats all this about people moving to austin all the time?
ciao
The Bottomless
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
RAD!
p.s. dont move to tx move to boston.
p.s.s. got my scanner, and a new puter, now i needa get adobe ><
Registered User
Level 10 Gladiator: Equites
Cool stuff! I really like the animal designs the most. Good on you for working on so many comic pages... that stuff isn't easy.
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Gnoll - Hellblazer's one of my favorites! And the stars are aligned for Austin.
jdeegz - Heh sorry man, I'm too accustomed to the warm weather down here- can't wait to see what you do with PS.
Sketch - Thanks! I want to Do Comics For A Living one day; I was mainly going for storytelling with these latest...but I still have to go in and fix quite a few annoying little things.
Design-thing inspired by Juno Reactor's song, "Hotaka"
Stronger then OLDE CHEESE!
Level 4 Gladiator: Meridiani
really cool update, i think you have an interesting line quality about your work. i like it.
radiance spreading through the darkness, like answers spilling from an urn of secrets.
The Website:
The Sketchbook:
The Blog:
Learner of Things
Level 7 Gladiator: Samnite
Thanks Slave!
Inspired by Juno Reactor's song, "Jardin De Cecile"
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