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    Help Mr Head

    I really wana take this piece to the end, and not whimp out on it. I know the drapery on the dress is poor, just wondering what other people have to say ?.
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    tone the back ground, get rid of some of the buttons, perspective on the shoes is kinda wierd.

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    Here's a goofy little link for this sort of thing. http://filmwise.com/invisibles/index.shtml

    Right now you've got photo crisp textures in your background a smooshy painted texture in all the clothes. They aren't speaking the same language. I'd suggest doing some painting in the background and also getting good ref for the clothes so you can see and paint the texture of those clothes.

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    Um. . . I think the anatomy needs a little work. . .

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