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    The Bones

    cd-cover. would love some crits...


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    I think the name should stand out more.There is a lot of stuff going on so it takes a while to know what we're looking at

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    I would say, saturate the name a bit more, so it jumps at you.

    the skull, while being the center of the piece, doesnt really have a lot going on in the color department. The background is more interesting right now, making the skull look a bit dull. Add some color to it to make it more lively.

    Also, have a look at some pics of teeth, to make the skull more convincing.

    I would also say the hole of the nose is a bit too big.

    Hope this helps.

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    should i try to desaturate the flames a bit to give more focus to the text and skull maybe?

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