Can't Stop

[Le0]

The world I love
The tears I drop
To be part of
The wave can't stop

You know as this continues...

[softocean]

The color work seems very fun. But the face seems to lack form and depth. I suggest checking some anatomy reference for drawing heads.

[sunandshadow]

Actually, I think the face lineart is ok, it's that the shadows are in the wring place that's making it look wierd. There should be dark shadow under the nose and all along the left side of the face, but less on the right side of the chin.