she's preparing

[thiagocosta]

hey,
This is my last one.

I want to hear all of your crits.

Thiago

[hp]

i liked the original sketch better...not showing the feet...or maybe just show a hint of a foot. also the pose in the sketch makes it seem more ominous...like she's thinking more about what is going to happen and doesn't like it. i would have added a bustier or something...i think it's unusual that she isn't wearing some kind of undergarments for that kind of dress, even if it's just a fitting.

[guitarjames]

i agree i prever the sketch but maybe dont scribble as much . try using less strokes

[jfwalls]

i agree i prever the sketch but maybe dont scribble as much . try using less strokes

Agreed. For me that would be the thing that bothers me most. Use a larger brush size to block in the basic values and colors, then work your way down to smaller brushes as you add the detail.

[thiagocosta]

Hey,
just to say thanks. You are helping me a lot with these crits.

[smoscar]

I got to agree with that but Im also feeling a lot more at the sketch XD

[markwagner]

I find it helpful to make a small clay sculpture in the same pose and put some light on it and see how that helps the entire process.

~M