---JAIR's SKETCHNESS--blah! --6-19-07

**JAIR428** · May 15th, 2007, 07:50 PM

WIP continued

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...romescape2.jpg

**Denart** · May 16th, 2007, 03:04 PM

sup janitor!

Good values and brushwork and color glow in your environments.

Ok enough of that, onto the real comments:
Look at that swamp piece with the bitches in the boat. I feel the background city feels like its kinda pasted on. (much more so in the 2nd version where you cropped the left side)
It's like they are floating into another dimension kinda.

And the trees in the background all seem to be based off this same shape but with just varying thickness. Vary the overall shape too, not just width

I really dig the new piece. its like a crater with a huge hump growth in the center. Good originality.
The cliffs on the left side (the pointy ones) look too similar...kinda

You making me wanna do environments fo real

**JAIR428** · May 25th, 2007, 05:41 PM

Denart- "Fellow Janitor" yeah good crits... it made me cry...

WELL heres the entire wip so far...

i may do some more... nit picky stuff

-gimme dem crits

This one i did yeaterday PS...

**hurricane** · May 25th, 2007, 08:02 PM

very cool stuff!

keep on sharing!
cheers

**razuel** · May 29th, 2007, 05:45 PM

nice, loving the cloud work

**JAIR428** · June 1st, 2007, 10:34 AM

some new speed digies from the past few days...

a quick KOLAB with Denert.... **cheers to many more KOLABS!!***

hurricane- thanks .....i will

razuel- hey man how are things?

**JAIR428** · June 5th, 2007, 10:37 AM

-here is another kolab with me, denert and a little bit of matyas...

heres the step by step progress'...

...more to come
-jair

**Denart** · June 5th, 2007, 10:57 AM

yes, more kollabs!

**JAIR428** · June 13th, 2007, 05:27 PM

some recent sketchbook doodles

mirror lake at OSU campus... 40 min pen

15 min random sketck... pen

random pieces of sketchbook pages...

denert- yes yes yes more!!!

**Envisor** · June 13th, 2007, 05:34 PM

Nice new pile of sketches. I just went through the first orientation session this past weekend. I saw some of your pieces in the Crane Center I think. They look really nice in real life. These last sketches, ones from life, but how about the second and third pieces?

**WARHEAD** · June 13th, 2007, 06:01 PM

Dude - Just have to say, awesome sketchbook ! great use of traditional media, wouldn't mind seeing some oils and tech stuff to 'mix it up'. Great work.

**JAIR428** · June 15th, 2007, 12:01 AM

Here's something that ive been messing with these past few days...

Envisor- yeah i have a painting and some drawings in Canzani center.
Yeah pretty much i saw a bunch of zombies walking across downtown columbus and i had to draw them... so...
If your still on campus you see me walking around doing janitor work heh...

WARHEAD- thanks... "wouldn't mind seeing some oils and tech stuff to 'mix it up" -----huh? ...yeah i guess i need to do that more. my sketchbook has been a bit neglected lately...

**JAIR428** · June 18th, 2007, 06:44 PM

landscape thumbs... ideas

jus some experimentation...

**JAIR428** · June 19th, 2007, 03:48 PM

summore...

at the coffee shop...

pretty peepole...

**razuel** · August 22nd, 2007, 06:32 PM

Hey man, things are going well. I miss it over at CCAD a lot, but I'm still having a good time here.

Really liking the pen work from life, keep it up. Have you gotten Interpol's new album yet? It's amazing. I just saw them in concert a little bit ago.