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    Tef's Sketchbook

    Hi all.
    Here I decide to make my sketchbook. I hope that you will like that and that you will not hesitate to put comments.

    Thank you

    P.S : Sorry for my poor english

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    Salut !
    C'est tres bien tout ca! Tu pars sur le bon pied. Aucune critiques, continue a faire depuis nature. Souvient toi comment le corps se comporte, et n'hesite pas a voir ses limites. Etudies aussi les muscles, ca aide beaucoup pour comprendre son fonctionnement.
    Et merci pour le petit mots dans mon sketchbook
    Keep posting !!!
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    Merci !!! ca fait plaisir ton commentaire

    Mes premiers speed painting / My first speed painting.
    40 min :


    35 min :


    30 min :


    40 min : (line with Alias Sketchbook Pro)

    and le colo :
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    Hail there!

    Good looking studies, keep them on, looking great and one can learn
    tremendously by doing studies. Especially the hand-studies looks great!!

    Character studies are great as well, hopefully I am to see bigger versions
    with more details of them later on .

    I like the style you draw with, stick with it and do variations, add more
    things and what not you can ever imagine.

    Can't give any crits just now - just watch out that drawing proper
    proportions wont take as much time as it takes for me, hahah -

    Keep up the good work!
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    Thanks a lot Malavon Despana for your comments !!

    A session anatomy :

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    I like the anatomy studies and you seem to have the body proportions and face construction pretty well under control. Just one note for the sketching: you might want to focus more on the simple forms and 3d constructions before getting detailed with the contours. It could help especially with the hands. Also, a couple of crits for this picture: http://www.tefonline.net/2d/speed_pa...on/perso05.jpg ... The chin looks malformed, the ear is too small, the white highlight on the cheek should be higher (remember the cheekbone) and you could make the skin tones look more believable by placing less saturated colours on the lighted places.

    It's a great start, keep them coming!

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    Thank-you for the compliments and the counsels. It's exact, for my sketches, I have really tried to simplify my traits. For my first speed painting, it is true there is not poorly defauts and what's more, I have just realized than I forgot to do the eyes!

    Go here 2 sketches in the train does last night. It's a little update, I'm sorry

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    Hey man you have some good stuff on here.
    For your figures, you should start by filling in the basic shapes such as spheres, wedges, and so on, then add detail at the very end. Hope that helps

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    i really like your speedpaintings, especially the first one. It's got a nice style.
    Your observational sketches are great too, nice line quality and quickness!

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    You've come a long way since November 2004! Really cool anatomical studies.
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    Wow, lot of skeches. Good to see you draw stuff and people from life too. Anatomy studies are always a plus as well. I woud advise to study the anatomy of the mouth more. Your use of lines is good as well.

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    G'day!
    Love your hands. i had a hard time drawing some not too long ago. You did very well. And you some very good sketches here too. Very good let's se emore!
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    I like your stuff man.
    see ya around, and keep it up
    "That's cute.... but it's WRONG"
    Scary sketches (might cause health problems)
    ok, ok so not scary, true. But the health problems I'm not so sure off...

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    There needs to be some updatin' here, mhm.

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    Yeah, tef pm'ed me that there where some troubes, but he'll be back soon. Tef: it'll be much appreciated if you could give us an idea of how long you'll be gone. You should be able to sketch anywhere though

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    Very impressive first post and it shows amazing potential straightaway.
    http://www.tefonline.net/2d/sketchs/261004/sketch03.jpg
    i love this pic, very well done

    http://www.tefonline.net/2d/scan/02_sketch01.jpg
    this page and the next 4 after are just stuff i love to see. Lots and lots of study but with your style coming through as well.

    http://www.tefonline.net/2d/speed_pa...on/perso03.jpg
    hahahahhahaha brilliant!
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    Update Please! :p
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    you seem to have a good handle on what you need to be doing and an increasing sense of form. Keep pulling elements together and refer to masters for goals and understanding. Remember that at this point life drawing comes before concept. m
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    Don't miss the rise

    This is actually Wolverine's sketchbook

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    TEF where are you man? you were doing so well with your studies! Come back and let us know you are ok and post some more man!
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    Glad to see you doing some anatomy and structure studies <> the more you know the further you will go.

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    Hi all
    That was long. I decided to resume my old thread for a little change and know your impressions and comments.

    Beware, my English is still poor, therefore, sorry: P

    First I began in the speedpainting. This is my first test:






    Tonight or tomorrow I'll post later

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    small update :


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    Now i work the rocks on the sides:


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    Cool work! Interesting composition in the last piece, though I think it's a little distracting how the ships are pushed to the edges and the one is even cut off. You might try some sketches to work out the perspective and composition before going in and rendering... nice values though... Good luck, keep up the studies!

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    Hi Chief
    Thank you for your comments. I also have some problems also centring. I will work it
    I forgot to post the latest update :


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    Hi
    this is my final image
    It's not perfect but I'm just happy for a first speedpainting :
    C&C please to help me progress !
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    Red face

    Hi!

    This is a very long time that I have not come here because I was really busy and also some problems.
    In 2010, I just stopped drawing for the coup full of reasons and I took over three weeks ago. So I take everything slowly.

    I continue with this thread and I'll put everything I've done before and after stop
    C & C Welcome and I'm glad to be back here. By cons, sorry my English is probably not improve

    before stopping :


    With Alchemy :






    for 3 weeks





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    Hi !
    Small update
    C&C welcome !
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    Hey man, thanks for coming by my SB. Nice updates, just keep going man...the only way to get better is to never stop!

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