jus drawing some hotties 11.19

**jzeltman** · April 6th, 2006, 08:45 PM

Its my lil ole sketchbook. ive been drawin in it for a week so... more to come. >_<

NEW STUFF AT BOTTOM

Ive got more but my computer is virusified and being fixed, so that means no scanner. ill try and put stuff up as soon as I can.

please critique.

**jzeltman** · April 7th, 2006, 04:58 PM

went to the library to scan

detail

any critiques welcome. o and i started an anatomy study. only have a few drawings done right now or id post but ill post when i get more done.

**jzeltman** · April 8th, 2006, 04:07 PM

qwikie sp from last night

**jzeltman** · April 24th, 2006, 10:01 PM

hey thanks for the critique. my scanner is down again (shakes fist in air) but these are some of my tshirt designs that ive been workin on. ill try and go to the library and upload stuff. thanks again for the critiques.

poster design:

tshirts

hall shirts

dorm shirts (that wont get used- stupid deadlines)
cant decide if i like the black and white or blue better

all for now. im goin to the library tonight to scan though.

critique these if youd like. or jus tell me if ud be willin to pay money for em

**jzeltman** · April 24th, 2006, 10:43 PM

here is another update

two qwikie sps

crappy sketches

SP

DSG idea never finished

random girls

bored during class, first serious pen drawing

**jzeltman** · April 24th, 2006, 10:46 PM

labbie kickin me out (fist raised)

joanna krupa

anatomy study

crits please

**jzeltman** · April 25th, 2006, 12:42 AM

hooray for messin around w the wacom n photoshop

10 mins

**jzeltman** · April 25th, 2006, 01:23 AM

painted (horrible might i add) version of the previous 10 min sketch

maybe 30 mins or a lil more

**jzeltman** · April 26th, 2006, 01:10 AM

heres the start of a project of drawing a sculpture. this is the first sketch. obviously needs a lot of work since its just lines. but it will get there. will post updates as they happen. not that nebody will comment. but i will do it anyway. thanks

by the way, how do you change the title of the thread. im perplexed by this. thanks

**jzeltman** · April 30th, 2006, 03:07 AM

more random stuff.

hooray for no comments!

**Recursive_End** · April 30th, 2006, 03:15 AM

Good work. The faces look good, but try to get a hand on loomis's planes. They can help you alot!
Also, try to draw as less lines as possible. And try cross hatching

The graphic design pics you posted earlyier really pop out of everything. It'be cool to see some more

Anyway, keep posting !

**jzeltman** · April 30th, 2006, 03:42 AM

thanks for the crit. latly ive been doin a lot of stuff for my friends movie.

heres one of the shots:

i also do web design, but most everything that ive got online is kinda lame cuz the ppl that wanted me to make it for them.

but heres one example:
http://4cfrontpanels.com

i would show the other site, but some lady took it over and messed it all up.

thanks again for the crits. z

**jzeltman** · April 30th, 2006, 11:42 PM

random drawin that is kinda me, but not so much. the hair is awful. i knew i shouldnt have drawn the hair. only one of my first few attempts with pen.

crapiness:

**Recursive_End** · May 1st, 2006, 12:06 AM

good good good !
You got the shading well. But keep in mind that outlining tends to flatten the pic. For exemple the nose should only have sime values, no lines.
Work alot with your values, sometimes it could be as thin as the lines, so just get uesd to it.
Hope it helps
D.

**jzeltman** · May 3rd, 2006, 02:21 AM

heres a lil photoshop messin around. tell me what you think

crits please

**jzeltman** · May 3rd, 2006, 04:08 PM

hooray for learning and messin with photoshop.

**jzeltman** · August 28th, 2006, 03:31 PM

well long time no post. but this is my first crack at drawing in a couple months. so i know it sucks.

and the scanner didnt do a good job. crits welcome.

**jzeltman** · October 8th, 2006, 02:10 AM

howdy. sorry for the long delay. ive been working feverishly on two ridiculously large drawings (2'x3') one taking 7 hrs and the other Im 12 hours in and somebody moved the still life so I have some problems since im only half done.

in the meantime, heres some stuff that Ive recently done.

Soccer Jerseys:

Hall Tshirt Design:

Charcoal 11''x14''

crits welcome and desired please

**jzeltman** · October 9th, 2006, 01:02 AM

hey there again

ive got 25 sketches to do in two weeks. im way behind. plus my mad huge project im even more behind on. I need to learn to draw smaller projects. but whatever.

Stone Bridge: (2.5 hrs charcoal)

critiques?

**jzeltman** · November 1st, 2006, 09:05 PM

well this is some of my recent sketchbook drawings for skew. some i like and some i dont. ive really fallen in love with charcoal. yay. im starting to slowly get back into graphite, but more than anything im trying to expand. i need to start drawing from my mind more often, cuz im way bad at it. im also working on figure drawing too. yay.

heres some junk. so what you gonna do with all that junk, all that junk inside my trunk (of a sketchbook ;P)

Kinda dissapointed in this one cuz the boy on the right is supposed to be like 4 yrs old but he looks like 40. eh

ive had a thing for clouds lately. there majestic

yay more clouds

tried out my new white to black pastels. yay for skewl purchases

ive also had a thing for old barns, i guess its just being in kentucky, this one didnt get finished, eh

kinda bummed aboot the smudgy-ness going on in the roof, stupid crappy erasers.

ive been getting back into anatomy. yay. i downloaded this kewl figure drawing reference that lets you spin the model around 360 degrees and 180 degrees vertically. the only downside is there was only one pose on this one. (it was free and im poor so i cant buy the others.

first cracks at it (haha theres butt-cracks so it makes it funny.)

i like drawing in pen for some reason, but they didnt like me this time

getting a little better

this next one, specifically the pose on the bottom, i tried to do a really good job on for an hour and a half, but it sucked so bad. then today in drawing class we did gestures for an hour and a half so i think that helped and it doesnt look fantastic but a heck of a lot better than it did last nite.

i like the top one cuz i like the economy of line. yay. improvement?

critiques are invited

good day and GLU

**jzeltman** · November 2nd, 2006, 09:51 PM

heres a poster that I did recently.

**jzeltman** · November 8th, 2006, 08:05 PM

Hello again.

Just a small post this time.

I had to revert to my old sketchbook. My current one is on display in the art buidling at skewl.

Heres a hall t-shirt design. Not to complex. But I still like it.

As always, critiques are welcome.

**jzeltman** · November 17th, 2006, 12:05 AM

Ive been drawing more lately, finally. I guess thats a good thing. I tried doing things from my head cuz I'm way bad at it. Some other life drawings as well.

I also tried some digital drawings as well. The first one turned out well, but the second not so much.

12 minute portrait of my friend at lunch.

Here are some drawings from class in the cafeteria.

A little 10 min SP. I need to do more.

More life drawing:

First digital drawing that I like:

The second that didnt go too well: (I try to be a perfectionist and it doesnt work)

**jzeltman** · November 17th, 2006, 01:44 PM

A 20 SP that turned into an hour SP. i think its pretty close to the real deal.

**AztcFireFlower** · November 19th, 2006, 12:08 AM

Wow! Tremendous progress!!!!!! From post #6 SP to this recent one, youve been studying BIG time. I'm caught up, mainly, in faces, portrait studies, so my focus here is on your SP's. I have to hit the basics once again, if I expect to continue forward. How inspiring. You are driven to succeed, I can see that. The charcoal drawing is also very good.
The latest SP....super good job on structure and grasp on proportion! Not smelly at all. Keep it up.

**jzeltman** · November 19th, 2006, 09:05 PM

heres 3 hrs of drawing of my friends

**Kvick** · November 19th, 2006, 09:50 PM

Woah yeah, big improvement

. Keep drawing from life and doing gestures like you're doing. Also I find it good to not be pessimistic about your work, it doesn't encourage you more and sometimes decourages you. And besides, if it isn't all that great, when you improve in a month or more you can look back and say "wow I've gotten a lot better". And all that does is keep up optimistic thinking, which will convince yourself to try and improve more, at least thats what I believe.