Inside Outside

[Akumyo]

Or, image that never wants to be finished.

I've been toying with this idea for some time now, but every time I get it on paper I'm dissatisfied. Please beat up this image so I can draw it again, hopefully better next time.

[Pixeldragoon]

I would love to crit it... and parts look good, but I don't fully understand what I am looking at... Alot of the lines are so scratchy that it's kinda hard to see... But the parts I can make out (face, pose) Seem alright so far.

[nafa]

Seems like this guy is ripping himself open to expose his inside. If so, you should look at some reference of the human skeleton.