WIP: dawn

[vainfantasy]

below are some process shots from an illustration i'm working on for my company's website. i have a few more illustrations to complete, but i was curious to get some comments on what i have so far.











here is the "final" illustration. the bonsai from previous versions is going to be the nav and won't actually be a part of this illustration.

http://www.vainfantasy.com/art/main.jpg

[invinciblewombat]

maybe check the perspective on the gate/fence, it looks a little off

[vainfantasy]

yeah it's been bothering me, but i can't tell what's off. maybe lower the backend of the gate?

[invinciblewombat]

i was thinking that it looks a bit like it's leaning backwards, there's porbally going to be a pretty defined cast shadow on it too since it's a sunrise. the colors in the sky and the profile of the mountins in the distance beatiful by the way.