AIB Animation( Bournemouth ) Dont Bother WIth first 10 pages..they suck

[dannE-B]

thanks flaskpost and lewis. Im glad you liked my life class work, that one was tough to do

[dannE-B]

just practising in ps..got so much to learn.
my teen challenge entry.

[dannE-B]

[Dile_]

Nice characters !
I have a question..
how do you get this "brown" effect into your Traditional pieaces?
like in this post 17
??

[dannE-B]

thanks dile, thats just coffee sploshed on me paper before-hand.

[Tenelaus]

You've got some great observational skills man, those lifedrawings are a lot more advanced than your imaginative work, I think the reason being that you just need to spend more time and thought on your imaginative drawings - you're starting to do it with those latest ones I think. Loads of improvement here, keep it up!

[Njord-E55]

Last one is looking jolly good. Did you use any kind of ref for the pose? There is a good sense of motion in the picture. THe one adjecent to it is not that good in my opinion. To myne limbs going in to many directions, and also the anatomy is a bit wierd. Keep making more drwings like the last one.

[dannE-B]

Thanks Njord, nope didnt use ref and yea that image does have some issues, thanks for pointing them out for me.

[Dile_]

ah cool
Coffee I'll try that, nice update!

[Njord-E55]

Interesting figures. There is some anatomical issues with the faces. The outline is to straight. If you aim for stylisation this is fine, but if not you might want to do some face studies.

[jsispitz]

I think I want to marry your sketches
*insert heart here*

[dannE-B]

thanks people. well with the characters with the straight faces i was going for some sort of style, but im going to take your advice and do some studies and some more anatomy studies...and lol jsispitz that made me laugh out loud , thanks for your kind words..i will get cracking with some more work.

[dannE-B]

some quick sketches.

[dannE-B]

Been pretty frustrated today, due to my college work thats due when i go back after these holidays. I cant seem to get it right...so after hours of frustration i decided i needed to unwind, so i did this, it worked....i feel much better, still lacking my college work but tomorrow is another day

[Matt Smith]

You are getting some nice movement in some of these sketches. Try thinking about your forms more. I feel that some of the more rendered sketches are lacking a good sense of the form and I dont feel the turning of the basic shapes yet.

[dannE-B]

thanks matt..will work at it.

[dannE-B]

lol this first one looks like she's sat on her head, that was just coincidence, honest.

[dannE-B]

[TheGnoll]

really nice life studies, but the anatomy looks excellent in some drawings while in other drawings you don't concentrate enought to make it look right.Like the quick gesture stuff.

Keep on postin!

[thegreypencil]

howdy mancunian

keep those studies coming that suit of armor? its great..would be better ifyou kept your heart into it..i get the feeling its sort of burnt out towards some areas. the interest that is.

could be wrong though...dont mind me if i am!

where do you go for your life studies? im in manc too!

[dannE-B]

thanks guys for stopping by. Yea TheGnoll, i do loose some concentration when im doing some of my drawings, i will have to be more patient. Whaaay greypencil, nice to see another mancunian on here. My life class stuff is done as part of my college course at pendlton, salford. where abouts you from my friend?

[thegreypencil]

Oooo sweet. is it open to the public?

Im living in stockport but I work in the city centre and get my life drawin there. Im just trying to fish for more life drawing classes about hehe its addictive no?

Be mindful of your thoughts someone once said your drawing will get better that way...worked for me

[Njord-E55]

As said before. there are some anatomy issues here. I'm also having some problems with this and it can get rather frustrating when working without ref.
Some of your stuff is very good, some of it isn't. Do some more shoulder studies since many of your problems are there. Especialy in the interlocking of deltoid, biceps-triceps and the collar bone + the big breastmuscle i cant remember the name of.

The rest is looking good and some of the characters are looking sweet.

[dannE-B]

No unfortunatley its not open to the public greypencil, where abouts do you do your life class in manchester? dont know many places myself. Thanks Njord for the pointers, i will work out these issues.

[mentler]

Like the direction of this thread <> hope to see you at SoFA

[thegreypencil]

hey its rogue studios near picadilly station.. message me for details...wednesdays 0630-9.15pm

[dannE-B]

-thankyou mentler, your work is excellent.

[sabe2003]

I really dig your hand studies and those two eyes you inked. Oh and this character is dope> Thanks for the comment on my pad.

[Rolo]

You are doing well! From not so good anatomy to great anatomy! http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...mate/form2.jpg that is great!! KEEP IT UP!
rolo

[dannE-B]