Sketchbook: First Colors !! | October 11th

[Zaknafain]

Some good sketches in here.

[MattGamer]

nice pencils man! do you like the star much? hehe, i see it everywhere in your images

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1155123734
i like the bodies in this one

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1154644718
this screams, "hotness!" hehe

[Matt Smith]

good looking sketches, the newest one i like alot, looks like an interesting character. keep up the good work.

[Qxzi]

Hey,

good pencil sketchs here. Good line work as well. How about more pencil vaule stuff, or maybe even some anatomy studies, just to get
things starting. Im liking what you are doing any, keep it up !!!

Qxzi 8)

[$unshine]

Hey Recursive, il faudrait que tu me donnes des cours... It's.. it's... good work. J'en perds mon "english", excuse-moi pld:

With what you do work like pencils ? I like your drawings
Keep it up, mooore !

[asoir]

Great to see your lines closer! Cmon man, I want a tut!

[Recursive_End]

Spade: Thanks alot as always man =)
Zaknafian: thank you very much !!
Mattgamer: thanks for the words! and yeah i do, dunno why.. and i'm not a pro communist either.. :>
Matt Smith: I'm returning you the compliment,those Frazetta studies are looking great.
Qxzi: thanks alot =) i'll do some asap !!
$unshine: Salut monsieur ! Ben je commence les lignes avec un porte mine normal (pentel P205) puis le rendu avec un crayon en bois normal (HB) =)
Merci d'être passé !
Marco: hehe, well the best i can do is a webcam through msn, though i have to see if my mom doesnt uses it =)

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I hate this page, good reason to do plenty more !

[[void]]

Damn i need to work on my rendering more. Nice stuff dude keep it up, who would you say are your influences?

[Spade]

is that from your head man? really great stuff happening there, abit of wes but still nicely original Your style seems to be developing really well, its great to see. Cant begin to tell you how much i like that last picture (you say you hate it??).

I noticed that in your poses a couple of posts back that your legs seem abit outta preportion and the angles seem off, so do some study in that area, but you torso's and arms are looking solid. Keep it going man, i want more!

[Kicek]

hey man... you hate that page? i dont! I love it! rendering is awesome as usual esp. the guy at the top.
C

[Dile_]

Damn i need to work on my rendering more. Nice stuff dude keep it up, who would you say are your influences?

oh tricky question ? WES I would say

Good work man I like your pencils stuff alot and yeah, reminds me of we ALOT
wich is good! Keep at it!

[[void]]

Well that was what i was thinking but i didnt want to assume i dont like getting labeled personally.

[Alday.J]

Alors là, chapeau: Good progress with the values !
Maintenant, essaye de travailler un peu plus la construction de tes persos, spécialement les articulations [trés dur, je sais].
Je dis pas ça pour te casser, je suis juste agréablement surpris par tes progrés, alors je me permet une critique que j'espère utile. Voilà !
@+ sur la toile !
Julien.

[$unshine]

Alors là, chapeau: Good progress with the values !
Maintenant, essaye de travailler un peu plus la construction de tes persos, spécialement les articulations [trés dur, je sais].
Je dis pas ça pour te casser, je suis juste agréablement surpris par tes progrés, alors je me permet une critique que j'espère utile. Voilà !
@+ sur la toile !
Julien.

I agree with you. Recursive End a tout pour progresser, et je lui souhaite !

$unshine: Salut monsieur ! Ben je commence les lignes avec un porte mine normal (pentel P205) puis le rendu avec un crayon en bois normal (HB) =)

Merci pour ta réponse. 'Tite note tout de même : je suis une mademoiselle

Tes derniers gribouill'z m'ont agréablement surprise... Continue dans cette voie !

[3nasty]

wow..really good pencil work man...keep it up

[Olof]

Aw!
Must ask you, how big do you work when doing those sweet renders like your last one?
Looke so sharp it's insane..

keep posting !

.peace

[Eriboss]

ello dood, man I don't know why I havent stopped by here properly.
This stuff looks great, really tight renderings, and anatomy looks pretty sharp too.
The only thing I would say is that although some of the poses you choose are quite dynamic they seems to stiffen up when they are fully rendered - Really try to push the energy of the movement in the poses with the flow of the lines you use to construct them and it will take your stuff to the next level i'm sure. Can't fault the rendering tho, really nice stuff. I like the page constructions too, all round cool !
Look foward to more man,

Cheers

Eri

[Recursive_End]

Asgardian: i'm glad i pushed you to work more. Though, don't think that rendering does everything. Lines do, rendering comes after understanding completly your subject. Which can only be seen with a nice and well put line =)
About my influences, well yes, as dile mentionned, wes is a pretty big one for me cause i discovered plenty of things i didnt knew about pencils by looking at his stuff.
but long before him, i totally loved Marko's universe and anatomy.

Spade: yes, everything from my head, except the girl on the bottom right. Ah finally a crit, and a good one. i keep on doing a normal and not too researched outline of the legs, and that's an issue i will fix. thanks alot for the words.

Kicek: lol, actually i find that he's the guy who ruined the page. I really didnt get what i wanted from him. But i guess what doesnt pleases me might please someone else. thanks !

Dile: hehe, good answer. Though i don't really feel happy about it. I mean sure i can get inspired by someone, but it's certainly not something i would do always. The only that really inspires me about him is his technique. Once i'll be able to have a confort zone as big as his, i'll start doing my very own stuff. Until then, i have to study how other did their own =)

Julien: Merci ! je vais m'y mettre. Et ne t'inquietes je n'y vois pas du tout de désencouragement, justement le contraire =) . Donc je vais me mettre a ces articulations et fissa ! Merci d'être passé !

$unshine: oops désolé ^^. Ben merci beaucoup pour l'encouragement. Je laisserais pas tomber, surtout là où j'en suis, le tout debut =)

3nasty: thanks man, i'll do my best !

MorteM: Actually it's an A4 sized paper, so .. well yeah, it ain't very big... but in the other hand i'm kindof masochiste ^^

Eriboss: Thank you very much for you suggestion. Actually it's one of the things i'm working on. It's a bit hard keep the dynamism of a pose while putting a sticky rendering on it. I think a less attentionned and patient one would keep things moving... but i'm not sure, i'll keep seeking.
Thanks alot man !

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So, i mainly wanted to answer to the replies. I'll do lots of studies of everything in the next update. I spent my day outside looking for a good spot to draw people.. and nothing turned out interesting. I'll keep looking.
Those pics were done like 5 minutes ago, just a tiny reason to reply.
Sorry if you were waiting for a fully rendering page or anything, but they'll come later =)
pen, no ref.

[asoir]

Classy sketches, love the quality, faces are brilliant! Keep stuff like this going!

[demented]

Sup man

thanx for the kind words in my sb mate - always appreciated.

Think that second one could turn into a killer design, the composition already feels great. The nose of the dude with his turned so that both his eyes show feel a bit off, but I don't think its a structural or anatomical problem. Really like the overall feel, those are sweet!

Think you've got some of the most promising talent around bud. keep posting man, this is definitely a thread I need to visit more often.

ciao dude!

- d.

[Meatsworthy]

About my influences, well yes, as dile mentionned, wes is a pretty big one for me cause i discovered plenty of things i didnt knew about pencils by looking at his stuff.

This is totally what I'm doing with your stuff. So yeah, even the first page was good to me

[blanquish]

hey man, stacks of improvement here, especially the gestures,
Your rendering is getting waay better, some great stuff here

[xoet]

you are causing me to get out my sketch pad and put down the computer for a bit...

[Lazy]

Looking good as usual, perhaps you should start doing color sketches too or train on some environmental skethes aswell, to broaden your horizon.
I like your smooth touch to your works.
In terms of anatomy and studies you are still doing great.

[Qxzi]

Hey,

good last update you got there! Good stuff, those faces look very cool, keep it up !!!

Qxzi 8)

[mentler]

Last couple of updates very strong <> excellent faces and features

[Lord Dubu]

Last couple of updates very strong <> excellent faces and features

Heh, I've been a programmer for too long. I read this as a negative comment because of "<>".

[MattGamer]

i like the one you hate. it's really really nice
haha i hate it when i go somewhere and i cant get any interesting faces to draw - it makes me sad.

i love your updates.

[Recursive_End]

Marco: thanks man
D: thanks !! yeah you're right about the eye, the left one is a bit too small. thanks alot for the nice words !
Meatsworthy: i'm glad those pages were usefull to you :>
Blanquish: thank you!
xoet: Good ! lol
Lazy: thanks, and yeah, i'm about to do some perspective studies. Just a few anatomy studies and i'm done =)
Qxzi: thank you =)
Micheal: thank you very much for the nice comment !
My lord: hehe
Mattgamer: Thanks ! I think you would get depressed coming here ^^

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More stuff to come !

[demented]

How the hell is that "Crap"? Totally dig those designs - has me thinking of Wes' designs. Really cool concepts, love the way you compose these. The eyes in "crap" (?!) are lovely, beautifully rendered. keep this up and you're gonna own dude!

ciao!

- d.