Interceptor's House of Bacon --- August 21st UPDATE. Eklispe Duo WIP ---

**spacemanchris** · October 13th, 2005, 03:58 PM

fabulous line weight man! Truly great.

**Wertle** · October 13th, 2005, 08:30 PM

The inks are fantastic! Really great line quality there.

I am very fond of the warrior lady, how far are you going to push the coloring? I'd be interested to see you push the shadow color over the flesh. Maybe some complimentary colors here or there. The foreshortening in the arm resting over the rock looks a little stiff, but that might be corrected by coloring and giving volume to the rock.

Nice stuff!

**Interceptor** · October 14th, 2005, 02:57 AM

**Snowsfall** · October 14th, 2005, 03:07 AM

love your stuff

Now I want to see a manly man drawing from you mkay

**Aly Fell** · October 14th, 2005, 03:52 AM

Originally Posted by Interceptor

and a quick paint over... she looks.. lesbian to me for some reason

I don't think she does... but why not put another girl in the scene and turn the idea into a feature... hmmm the possibilities....

Her hand seems a bit stiff maybe... perhaps relax it a little...

There's some really lovely stuff here Loren!

**Danomight** · October 15th, 2005, 11:26 PM

I rally like your faces man, they all have this particular style about them. Keep up the studies! Hope to see more soon!

**Interceptor** · October 18th, 2005, 12:54 AM

On my break at work

**ApolloNuevo** · October 18th, 2005, 01:08 AM

some really great line work here! i especially like the figures drawn in pink. on the 'lesbian'...her shirt doesn't seem to follow the contour of what her chest should be.

-apollo

**seth1** · October 18th, 2005, 01:08 AM

Really nice work mate! Loving the hands....

**bengonzalez** · October 18th, 2005, 02:27 PM

Always a pleasure looking at your stuff there is such a nice softness to it. Your lines make the images look like they can be touched. Ok on to crit. the last one, even though I will admit to not being very familiar with drawing female anatomy, looks like her chest is too long and the breast start a little two far down on the page. the breast should fallow the chest muscles but here they see to hang from it.

Love the hand studies and now I'm also curious as to what the blurred text says.

Can't wait for more Keep it up.

**Interceptor** · October 18th, 2005, 10:26 PM

**seth1** · October 18th, 2005, 10:33 PM

Really nice sketches again! I think you need to make the nose more prominent, and also make the lips smaller and also bring out the chin more and bring it up... Maybe that will help i dunno!

**PaulGanguly** · October 18th, 2005, 11:36 PM

Wow, I can't believe I haven't looked through this sketchbook yet. Your style is slick. I like your less anime-flavored ones. They show a little more originality.

Either way, they're cool. Gonna definitely keep an eye on this one.

**bengonzalez** · October 21st, 2005, 11:40 AM

Nice work on the freeform sketching. Give the manly man a try. just do a Liefeld impersonation. Ha. Can you believe they gave him Teen Titans to pencil. Oh well I was a fan of his when I was 15 so guess he still has that market going for him.

Edit: Is Gatery your character I might want to give him a try.

**Interceptor** · October 21st, 2005, 01:19 PM

Originally Posted by bengonzalez

Nice work on the freeform sketching. Give the manly man a try. just do a Liefeld impersonation. Ha. Can you believe they gave him Teen Titans to pencil. Oh well I was a fan of his when I was 15 so guess he still has that market going for him.

Edit: Is Gatery your character I might want to give him a try.

I feel bad about the whole drawing girls and young kid pictures. My project tonight is some Conan style manly man drawings. Big biceps and hairy chests, men getting drunk off ale

And feel free to have a go at Gatery, man. I'd love to see someone else's interpretation.

**Interceptor** · October 21st, 2005, 08:16 PM

I am terribly sorry for the low qual. My scanner is acting up.. I started a manly man pic.... here is the start

EDIT. His torso is seriously misproportioned. Gotta work on this maly man thing

**Jtoons** · October 21st, 2005, 08:18 PM

your style is pretty evident in most of these pieces. you have an obvious command of line and it's thickness and thiness. my only vexxation, more updates! cheers mate. keep on the drawing.

**Danomight** · October 22nd, 2005, 12:23 AM

Let me know if you need some pictures of some SERIOUS muscles...

Oh, and nice sketch by the way.

-Danomight

**Wertle** · October 22nd, 2005, 11:05 PM

I'm very fond of that sketch, and how many of the muscles are subtley suggested rather than super-exaggerated. The misproportion may just be emphasized by the stylistic size of the head as compared to the body. It worked nicely with your Gatery picture, because it kind of emphasized his scrawnyish body type. Maybe with something like this just widen the shoulders more.

**bengonzalez** · October 24th, 2005, 01:31 PM

not bad on the last one. I love your sense of body proportions. it has a nice realism and doesn't go overboard with the muscles.

And Clear out your PM's your box is full.

Wanted to talk to you about the site thing.

**Interceptor** · October 24th, 2005, 02:19 PM

The gnarly looking guy in a self portrait

and ben, my inbox in cleared out, my bad

**Interceptor** · October 25th, 2005, 07:54 PM

Ch.O.W. thumbail sketch.. now time for the real deal

**Cyanid** · October 25th, 2005, 07:57 PM

do you use reference? whether you do or you don't, I am still impressed!
the flipping coin shows your creativity!! nice detail.

**bengonzalez** · October 26th, 2005, 02:13 AM

Dude you're Batman!! No way. nice self portrait you look like an anime Pirate.

Jennifer is looking good. Linework nice and Clean, Love the Aviator glasses. I would soften the slopes on the shoulders a bit she looks a lot like a gymnast.

My Take on Gatery is up not very different from yours and it has a lot of defects that I noticed once i flipped it horizontally to keep him left handed. he is a lefty right?

**ApolloNuevo** · October 26th, 2005, 02:21 AM

interceptor

way to keep up your sketchbook. i like the last girl w/ the yellow outline the most. well posed form. can't wait to see more bud. thx for stopping by my SB! lets see some more males though...you rock at chicks, challenge yourself some more.

-apollo

**Mikko Voipio** · October 26th, 2005, 08:32 AM

I din't understand why I haven't posted here, since this is one of my favourite sketchbooks here. There's really no need to say more. You have the talent and are doing very fine things here. Thanks also for visiting my sketchbook a while back.

**Danomight** · October 27th, 2005, 04:20 AM

You already showed me most of these, great sketches man. Can't wait to see your Ch.O.W. Nice work on the dude sketch from earlier, the torso anatomy is pretty dead on.

**Interceptor** · October 27th, 2005, 11:36 PM

lineart for thre Ch.O.W.

**Interceptor** · October 28th, 2005, 07:22 PM

Lineart

**Snowsfall** · October 28th, 2005, 08:01 PM

watch out for the angle of the nose, alot of the time in your stuff it is slightly off. Not too noticable but eh, I have to crit something.

Great linework, Its looking yummy. If it wasnt inked all ready I would say to try to get the dagger more in her mouth, more teeth etc.
oh I guess I said it anyways
yea