Critique my Work

**Dr.Bigdick** · September 25th, 2005, 11:51 AM

Just want to know what you guys honestly think about the stuff I've done.

**perryarts** · September 25th, 2005, 12:05 PM

well, bigdick...i would love to look, but nothing is showing up on my screen.

**Dr.Bigdick** · September 25th, 2005, 12:50 PM

should work now...

**perryarts** · September 25th, 2005, 04:27 PM

i think these are some interesting works...i like your sketching style. as finished paintings they definitely need more work on details, but i assume you already know that. they all look like underpaintings. what is your fascination with penises?

**Dirty C** · September 25th, 2005, 05:35 PM

they're too small to see, really, dude. no point hiding what you've done if you want crits..

**voraz** · September 25th, 2005, 06:02 PM

Dirty_C: they are thumbs that link to larger pictures.
I like the first one, overall I think they are still sketchy and need some more work.

**saz** · September 28th, 2005, 04:11 PM

I agree I think the first is the better one but overall the lacking visual interest to me. I also think the black outlines are bit too much with the colour as well

**riggen** · September 28th, 2005, 05:04 PM

agree with you guys.
the anatomical knowledge, perspective etc (=the drawings/sketches itself) are great, they all just got this heavily unfinished appearance.
do pen-sketches w/o color or color-works you finish

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however, id like to see more.

**RobHughes** · September 28th, 2005, 07:41 PM

Please change your upload site. I'm scared it's feeding pathogens to my box.

Will not crit till then.

Rob

**damdischink** · September 29th, 2005, 02:54 AM

hahaha, wassup w/ you and penis mang.

crit. on your 2nd drawing
your anatomy suck mang, if you really want to improve, you may wanna get some anatomy book/references and study from it. SERIOUSLY