Monster

**tuffenuff** · April 7th, 2003, 12:58 AM

Hello..
Here is a monster design.
I was trying to mix organic shape and hard - surface stuff
together.
Please tell me what u guys think.

- Jeff Kang -

**davi** · April 7th, 2003, 01:00 AM

very cool, i would go and paint alittle more with the ground, the grass/ground doesn't look like it's being effected by a the huge robot

**R_M** · April 7th, 2003, 02:08 AM

Hi tuffenuff,

your monster is amazing, the design is very strong, and the techinque is nice too!
I especially like the red lights and the small round plugs/thingy in the skin.

On the minus side I have to agree with davi on the grass, and I think that the bg is to different from the monster.. it feels like you did it as an afterthough, and used much lees time on it than on the monster. it is a shame, cause the image has so much more potential!

like the way you rendered the metal areas to...

**tuffenuff** · April 7th, 2003, 03:17 AM

Thanx for your comments guys...

I pretty much agree with your crits on the background(especially the grass area) which should be kinda eye sore in this work. Actually, I didn't pay attention to the background
cause I did not have enough time to add details for that part.
Man, I had to pump out 3 rendered concept arts and
2 high poly model in one week. U know.. I didn't have time
to scratch my ass.. man... :eek:
So I've just copied and pasted the background from royalty free stock photos and added some simple
effects such as blur and HUE&Saturation on it.
I'll add some more details for the grass area as you guys
suggested.

Again, Thanx for your great interests and comments!!

- Jeff Kang -

**KayCustomz** · April 7th, 2003, 03:49 AM

cool

**Fozzybar** · April 7th, 2003, 05:18 AM

I like the design and the rendering!

But the monsters left leg (right to the viewer) looks flat, especially the edges...the shadow parts are too much into black in my eyes...

**HEXXXER** · April 7th, 2003, 08:10 AM

Cool, looks very "DOOM"ish.
The Design of the legs and chest is nice.

**tuffenuff** · April 7th, 2003, 12:56 PM

THANX..

**Blackarts** · April 7th, 2003, 02:26 PM

this is pretty cool. I like red skin and the armor, they look pretty bad-ass. I think you could make the face more evil/sinister looking if you pushed the eyes back a bit. And how about adding a bit of a tongue in his big gaping mouth? Anyways, nice work.