Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: Street photography - suggestions, comments, criticism

  1. #1
    ElSapo is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
    Join Date
    Mar 2005
    Posts
    30
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Street photography - suggestions, comments, criticism

    I've recently been trying to shoot a lot more of I guess what you'd call "street photography." The result has been less polished, but more spontaneous.

    Overall, I'm fairly happy with the direction my stuff is heading in. But that said, I'd appreciate it if people could take a look at my site and perhaps give some feedback. General thoughts (or specifics) would really be appreciated.

    As an example of the type of thing I've been doing ...



    Any comments - either here or on the site, would be appreciated.

    Thanks -

    Robert Walton
    www.TeamWetDog.com

  2. #2
    1-thought is offline Registered User Level 3 Gladiator: Catervarii
    Join Date
    Dec 2003
    Location
    San Diego, CA.
    Posts
    112
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    take a ton more.

    I like it, but seems a little grainy.

    you can really use the light sources to "paint" some nice images.

    whats the settings here?
    exposure? time? size etc?

  3. #3
    modern's Avatar
    modern is offline "we can take dis boat..." Level 3 Gladiator: Catervarii
    Join Date
    Oct 2003
    Location
    Cleveland Ohio
    Posts
    127
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    im no professional or anything but my eyes just battle for whether im gonna look to the right or left there is no real focal point. it is like there 2 images almost. maybee if you sshow more of the building or the street. i like the picture other than that. it has a good night life feel in my opinion. im a sucker for night shots. I definitely want to see more pictures from you.

    its a good start, keep trying new things.

    what kind of camera do you have?

    -garrett

  4. #4
    ElSapo is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
    Join Date
    Mar 2005
    Posts
    30
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Modern said...

    my eyes just battle for whether im gonna look to the right or left there is no real focal point.
    I think that's probably true -- or would be, moreso, if the area on the right weren't so dark. But depending on how you mean it, I kind of think that's a good thing. I like pictures that keep your eye moving: as long as it's moving toward something, that is.

    If you keep looking around this frame because you don't see anything to look at, that's a bad thing. If your eyes keep moving because there are different elements to take in, that's good quality.

    I think, anyways.

    I think the picture I posted here is probably close -- I really like the two blurred figures, personally. But I also wish there was just a little more going on, in the right side of the frame.

    Good thoughts, thanks. And you don't, by any stretch, ever, need to be a professional to offer good criticism.

    1-thought said...

    I like it, but seems a little grainy.
    Yeah, and maybe too much so. I've had two prints made (that I haven't gotten back yet). In one, I left the grain/noise, and in the other I reduced the noise and lost some detail. I should get the prints back today, and I'm curious how they look.

    I actually like a lot of grain in my photos, but that's picture to picture and personal taste maybe. And at the same time, sometimes it can be too much. And funny how with film it's "grain" and with digital it's "noise."

    These are digital, shot with a D70 and the Nikon 12-18mm lens...

    Thanks for all the help so far guys. It's good to get feedback...

    Robert

  5. #5
    bugg_house555 is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Posts
    2
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Photo-graphy

    Hey. It's looking good. Keep posting stuff, and I will be sure to check it out.
    See you in class.
    -Andrew

  6. #6
    ElSapo is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
    Join Date
    Mar 2005
    Posts
    30
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    A closing note (I guess) on this image... I got the prints yesterday, and the non-grainy/noisy/pixilated image looks much nicer. The area on the right also has more detail in the print (although it's still fairly random detail).

    The end result is a print I like a lot. I had it done 11x14 with a few inches border on the edges - part of me thinks I could have gone bigger, but that size is so affordable up against the 16x20s I've made in the past. I hate that printing is cost-prohibitive, but then again I also hate that I wasn't born wealthy. Ah well.

    Robert Walton
    www.TeamWetDog.com

  7. #7
    Jucas is offline Registered User Level 2 Gladiator: Ordinarii
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Pasadena, Ca
    Posts
    50
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Interesting photo. I have been shooting alot of street photography for awhile now. I think the most important thing in street photography is a sense of storytelling.

    Elsapo, could you flip that image horizontally? See how it looks then. We (in western society) have a tendency to look at something from left to right. When your highest light and dark contrast is on the left part of the frame, we meet that first, then our eye looks for a secondary focal point to the right and there is not anything there in this case.

    What equipment are you using?

    -J
    `What sort of people live about here?' asked Alice.

    `In that direction,' the Cat said, waving its right paw round, `lives a Hatter: and in that direction,' waving the other paw, `lives a March Hare. Visit either you like: they're both mad.'

    `But I don't want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.

    `Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat: `we're all mad here...

  8. #8
    elsleepycrab's Avatar
    elsleepycrab is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
    Join Date
    Aug 2005
    Location
    San Francisco
    Posts
    34
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    i like the grainy quality of the photo quite a bit but i would have to agree with modern, i wouldnt put a line straight down the center of the photo, it creates a sense of being shot on the fly without much thought, if your going to split the picture have the line slightly to the right or more commonly slightly to the right. Hope that helps and keep up the good work. I would really like to see some more of this sort of photography

    -sleepy
    I used to have a deep and meaningfull quote here but that got a lil tiresome

    please crtic my sketchbook

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Similar Threads

  1. Street photography
    By vinc in forum POST YOUR PHOTOGRAPHY!
    Replies: 15
    Last Post: August 16th, 2006, 05:30 PM
  2. Street Photography
    By Bill Beaton in forum POST YOUR PHOTOGRAPHY!
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: May 2nd, 2006, 08:04 AM
  3. Need Contstuctive Criticism, or Comments
    By eminkey2003 in forum FINISHED ARTWORK- Finally!
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: June 9th, 2005, 11:19 PM
  4. Constructive criticism (and comments) wanted..
    By Danpurcell in forum FINISHED ARTWORK- Finally!
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: April 9th, 2005, 01:16 AM
  5. Comments? Suggestions?
    By FearlessFosdick in forum CRITIQUE CENTER & W.I.P's & PORTFOLIO REVIEWS
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: February 21st, 2003, 07:58 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •