long time i have posted ,so this is my last art^^
what do you think about it??
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Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
long time i have posted ,so this is my last art^^
what do you think about it??
....nevermind
Level 11 Gladiator: Essedarii
ummm...maybe to fast, i cant really say anything about it yet. Does she have some kind of bunny hears? if not then the hair composition is messed up...
To be compleatly honest, to simple and undefined for my taste, try thinner lines or blending the color a little bit ( unless you wanted it that way....in that case, the only thing might be to clarify the confucing lines abobe her head..or maybe just change the clor of the backround)
more manley than jason 
Level 12 Gladiator: Laqueatores
It's okay.
Good, crisp gesture drawing.
It's hard to give a critique of any real depth to SpeedPainting, simply because it's usually done too quickly to apply general Design and Composition criteria to. Most comments therefore, tend to be generalized ass-pats.
That's one reason we have a specific sticky at the top of this forum area just for Speed Paintings (It's the 3rd sticky from the top)...
~M
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Level 5 Gladiator: Myrmillo
ok ok
thx for replies
shamagi it's not bunny ears
it's her hair
(original drawing)
http://hermann.kayode.free.fr/lou.fu.jpg
thx shamagi i'll try to work on zone above her head^^
madster okay i'll try to change background ...
i worked on above her head
my next illustration
Last edited by airman; August 6th, 2005 at 02:01 PM.
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