last stuff(speed stuff hehehehe)

[airman]

long time i have posted ,so this is my last art^^
what do you think about it??

[Shamagim]

ummm...maybe to fast, i cant really say anything about it yet. Does she have some kind of bunny hears? if not then the hair composition is messed up...

To be compleatly honest, to simple and undefined for my taste, try thinner lines or blending the color a little bit ( unless you wanted it that way....in that case, the only thing might be to clarify the confucing lines abobe her head..or maybe just change the clor of the backround)

[madster]

Good, crisp gesture drawing.
It's hard to give a critique of any real depth to SpeedPainting, simply because it's usually done too quickly to apply general Design and Composition criteria to. Most comments therefore, tend to be generalized ass-pats.

That's one reason we have a specific sticky at the top of this forum area just for Speed Paintings (It's the 3rd sticky from the top)...

~M

[airman]

ok ok
thx for replies
shamagi it's not bunny ears
it's her hair
(original drawing)
http://hermann.kayode.free.fr/lou.fu.jpg

thx shamagi i'll try to work on zone above her head^^
madster okay i'll try to change background ...



i worked on above her head




my next illustration