:::enter the guenter:::

**guenter** · July 31st, 2002, 03:10 PM

hello everyone. glad to see that conceptart is back up.

here are some works in progress. i would really appreciate any comments or compliments. im in school right now majoring in previsualization so any tips are welcome.

heres some creatures

**Gray** · July 31st, 2002, 04:29 PM

I really like your style. Rendering is good allthough some areas are rushed and this degrades the whole image.

Personally i'm not a big fan of the type of characters. But that's probably just me. Overall great work => Show me more...

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edit:
Just saw your other post in the finished section and wanted to add i really like those. Especially the first on. Really dynamic.

**guenter** · August 1st, 2002, 01:46 PM

i appreciate the reply. your right about me rushing my drawings. i always end up doing that. thanks again.

**espaki** · August 1st, 2002, 01:50 PM

the first image seems a little off. the characters legs are a little off balance. also, his right bicep looks more like a bean than a muscle. Otherwise, looks good.

-Nate

**guenter** · August 1st, 2002, 02:14 PM

espaki- thanks. i agree about the legs, but i had already started my shading before i even noticed it. i guess i need to change his bicep too. someone in another forum said it looks like a "jelly bean". thanks again.

**guenter** · August 5th, 2002, 04:36 AM

somewhat of a coloring of one of the creatures. not sure what color to use for the bg.

**guenter** · August 12th, 2002, 02:35 AM

i need some ideas for a bg color

**chris** · August 12th, 2002, 03:20 AM

id recommend something that highlighted the fact the hes ripping a body in half. some sharp/hot colors with the hottest parts around the action of the pick. for far off from the action maybe some dark dark greens... hmm.

chris

**guenter** · August 13th, 2002, 01:50 AM

thanks for the reply chris. went with something a little simpler. any thoughts?

**MolvaDo** · September 11th, 2002, 05:37 PM

well i like the first drawing, it would be hilarious to actually point the barrel of the firing gun like inches away from the dude with the bazooka. the one thing I don't like is his legs. try something else, the goat legs just don't look right.

**AfroLaxMan** · September 12th, 2002, 10:32 AM

I partially agree with MolvaDo about the legs, but I think the goat legs can stay, but you should change up their position up a bit. Add some dynamic pose to them to really dictate the mood and action of the character. His face and his arms portray a lot of action, but his legs look sedated, giveing the whole piece an odd look.

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