i like the style of the comics, but they don't read like they should. for example, you shouldn't need arrows to indicate the flow of the panels. if you do, then it fails (in my mind) as sequential art. the first one: you start out in the upper right corner and go to the left. this is backwards, unless it's in a language that reads from right to left.
again, i like the style, but think you should work on the delivery. read Scott McCloud's "Understanding Comics" and you'll see what i'm talking about.
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