(no name yet!) finished version!!!

[mert_yavasca]

It's my new baby. I draw it last night and today start to paint. It has no name yet. You can suggest any name that you think or you can crit me as you want. I will put here stages of painting. I put there a detail pic so you can it closely. See you soon.

[Chяis]

This has alot of potential I really like the concept of it, careful on the glass effect on the bulb and the shading on the skull depending on how much detail you would like to show.

The scars give it a nice effect though I'm not sure about the gun replacing his hand, it looks off. He has a big bulge and then a flat hand, it just doesn't look right.

[kaganrazgirat]

hıımmmm sinsi sinsi yaptığın bu işi beğendim doğrusu.ama kardeşim o boyanmış halinden önce karakalemini koysaydın ya denyo.Ve neden karakaleminden sadece kesit koyuyosun onu da anlamış diilim neyse bunun hesabını bursadan dönünce sorarım sana SİNSİ PİÇ.

[Skulldog]

Looks like a really solid start, only a few things seem off to me.

Hopfully you plan to do more with that background, the pure black doesn't do it for me.

I'll agree with Chris, that gun arm doesn't seem to be right, though I can't place exactly how it's off.

The composition is a bit too even, figure standing in the dead center, with both arms apread out. Think about adding some more space to one side or the other to really break that evenness up.

I can't wait to see some progress on this one, the pencil is just wonderful on it's own, and I want to see what digital work does to this sucker.

[mert_yavasca]

thank you friends!
general : Sağolasın kardeşim. Nemesise bi tek omuzu benziyodur herhalde. Yani çizerken etkilenmdeim herhangi bi yerden. Thanks
Chяis : Thanks for your comments. I'm happy for you like it. Your crits about gun seem a bit right. Your crits in my mind.
Skulldog : I always think you r rights in all your comments. Thank for your suggestions. You should wait a little to see digital version. I hope u will like it.
kaganrazgirat : Please write in english my friend. Other friends can't understand you. Thanks for your turkish comments. Sensin pi.

[haribubba]

i think you should call it a batchbaby.

[mert_yavasca]

sorry for late. I have exams today. This is first step for painting. It's almostly done. Say your comments friends. See you.

[mert_yavasca]

I use photoshop and painter at the same time. I use painter for scars veins, an ı use photoshop for dark and light places. But I have no digipen so it's not easy. See you.

[mert_yavasca]

it's going very slow cause I have a lot of work to do on these days. (u can call me lazy. )

[JokingClown]

The gun attached to the arm doesnt look right, as mentioned. It is flat shaped while the arm is round. And there should be more arm. On the (our right) right arm, the fist should be larger, keep everything on the left how it is, and elongate it on the right.

[mert_yavasca]

in fact, I made a final work for batchbaby, but I don't like it so I'm doing a different version for it. What do u think about this bad (for me) version.

[look]

I don't like the last version, it looks very paste on. I like your previous ones better.

[mert_yavasca]

I think the same thing.

[ShaviSan]

I think the name Mordicant is nice

[mert_yavasca]

What it's mean? or it's just a name? I like it.

[Groove Zombie]

I suddenly feel like playing Doom...
Great piece man, but I agree on the topic of the gun-arm. I think perhaps if you made the back of it (the part attached to his arm) rounded and then tapered it off into the thin, square barrel it would look much more like it's actually attached to the arm. You also might need to move it down ever so slightly, looks a little high on the arm for the angle it's tilted at. I definately think you should do something that shows off the design, not completely covering up your character like your last version. Tres Bien.

[mert_yavasca]

I didn't finished it, it finished me . I realized that if you spend much time on a work u can lost your concentration. It finished because I don't do it anymore. C&C wellcome.

Thanks for names. I think "batchbaby" is a good name. Thank u harribuba.

[Limo]

very cool! But the fire seems somewhat copy-pasted, because of the dark edges

[mert_yavasca]

thanks limo. Here is a detail.