I haven't commented lately, but I've been lurking... great stuff man, your digipaints are getting better every time you do one. Your figures are improving a ton too. Keep it up!
I haven't commented lately, but I've been lurking... great stuff man, your digipaints are getting better every time you do one. Your figures are improving a ton too. Keep it up!
Fellah : I dont like the cat, because its uninteresting to look at, boring colors and design.... ah well, next time huh?
Profil : Thanks !
Cotron : Thanks man !
so, heres a face study/portreit thing...
it was a fast one, but i got some parts right, its alittle out of place and stuff, but i like it anyways, i wasnt aiming for photorealism either so..
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and heres the steps for someone if they are interested..
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cheers !
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so, time to show some 3d...
suggestions are warmly welcome !
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here's a shot with lights...
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HAHA, and animationsthey were alot of fun, nothing major, the task was to use the constrain-parent function..
http://www.rainysaturday.com/Hurricane/Diskus.avi
http://www.rainysaturday.com/Hurricane/Diskus2.avi
http://www.rainysaturday.com/Hurricane/Diskus3.avi
cheers !!
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cool model.. clean it up though.. there ar some bad verts on the face that don't make shape in any way and just detroy the structure..
also watch your meshflow.. like on his titty. just look all over.. try to have a nice all over flow.. edges going from A to A an thus looping all around.. like circles around its eyes.. mouth.. on around his eye and mouth connectin under the chin..
from just above the nosewings to under the mouth.. etc etc.. u probably feel these as an awesome lead artist.. clean it up..
animations are cool to.. but blend them more.. u really see the keyframes
good luck.. and keep it up.. cause u rock
Haha...funny animations...I think the head nods could be toned down a lot and slowed down, foot taping makes sence and looks good. Sorry I'm just assuming you want crits on this stuff. This model you've posted is cool but the topology could be improved. Try to make it all quads, and avoid poles. I think your paint skillz are awesome.
I couldn't see the anims. Crit on yer model; I think the arm lacks definition. Looks too much like a cylinder now. Push the def. on the shoulder-area as well. Makes the shapes read better I think. This might be stuff your planning to do, though.. hehe... Like people have said before me: watch your edgeloops. If your planning on deformations in your anims later, this is pretty crucial.
Cool concept, though. Can't wait to see an update! Are you going to texture it as well?
d-C
Hey, Bjorn! Really liked that portrait step-by-step. Do you plan on touching it up or just leave it as it is?
As for the 3D Model, as I'm just barely getting into 3D outside of architecture, I would have to say my only critique is that on the side view on the left of the post, you can see the bed roll (I'm assuming it's a bed roll... anyway the roll) on his back, but it seems to be attached by only one of the faces, kind of looks like it's been welded on, you know? As I said, I'm only starting with 3D modeling so can't say much, personally I think it looks great and you're on your way to having it turn out nicely.
Keep it up.
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wi_2 : Thanks alot ! i'm a 3d noob so i think i understand, hope so anyways![]()
Ham-e : as said above, im a noob when it comes to 3d, topology? Thanks for the input !
dCepT : Thanks for the input ! yea, im gonna texture it
IanE : AAAh, bedroll thing, will fix that someway, thanks man !
so, heres a ~1.5 hour color/anatomy study from refference..
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1 more on its way..
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fukini hot man .. makes me want to go tenderize a steak or something )
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Man, you totaly rock my socks of. Great female study, love it.
like i sed on msn the form and textures and everything is looking beautiful man keep it up, youve definitely improved!
MIKECORRIERO : Thanks man!
liam.c : hehe
Tigermilk : Thanks !
Pencilator : HEHE
rodrigo! : Thanks man, warms my heart to hear !
So, a new color/anatomy sketch... trying to see if i learnt something, of course i chose a strange palette so i couldnt really use any new theories...
ah well... got bored of it and called it "done" hehe
(Photoshop)
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NICE!!
her right arm (our left) is getting lost intot eh BG. can you seperate it out a bit?
always a pleasure seeing new stuff.. that dragon creature for metas challenge is dooooope
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tyboogie : Thanks for the input about the arm, you are correct, i dont think i have the energy or will to go back and alter it, later on maybe.. thanks for dropping by!
so, i saved the steps too if someone is interested...
HERE
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Hey man. I really love the last two nudes. Very nice colors and rendering. The last digital is looking great as well. Keep up the good work.
Here's a retarded comment, but its the first thing that comes to mind
"I'd do her."
That said,
Thanks for sharing
-britt
Dude, dude, dude!! DUDE! The lighting is awesome, bro! I like the details as well! She's good looking, but she's got all these battle scars. Nice touch
I'm going to the next one, for sure! I'll probably be in Stockholm godawfully early the 28. hehe.
peace
d-C
dakoscwash : Thanks man!
Jens : Hmmm, good point, but the hood didnt look as good....tricky...thanks for the input !
britt : HAHA, actually, i heard that comment on mIRC...hehe thanks for dropping by.
dCepT : Thanks, and its great that you'll come to the meet! looking forward to it!
so, this one started out as a OC session with !rodrigo, then he had to go so Photoshop adopted the sketch, and VIOLA ! a forrest guard...
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cheers and thanks for dropping by you ALL!!
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How do you do it![]()
Can't wait to meet up in stockholm and see how you work![]()
Shiiiit!! man that girl with the dragon has some tasty light,
I like her, and you faces are getting so much better
very fast, the torso of the dragon girl looks a bit to
big, I think there is a subtle mistake on the perspective
in the anlge of the toraxic cage, any way; its still superb work
Dam I really wanna be like you when I grow up!!
got to cach on with your crazy skills damet!!![]()
i believe everyone has to thank me, coz if i didnt have the OC session with him then the pic wouldve never been created, so i deserve all the credit,![]()
umm yeah anyways, your faces have improved a lot. nice!
Pencilator : hehe, yea, its gonna be great meeting and draw
maxetormer : thanks for the kind words man ! yea, you are right about the torso... i'll remember that!
rodrigo! : HAHA, yea, everybody give credit to !rodrigo!!!! thanks for the session bro !!
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i do not like it...bah, next time...
cheers !
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so, my wacom is broke... life sucks... i took my roommates for a while, but....my gear is broken !! gah..
well, i doodled some just for the fun of it, played alittle with colors...
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so, another update..
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cheers !
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nice! that creature looks like it would be hard to bring down. awesome stuff here. i really like the b & w's on the first page. very graphic and well done. no crits from me.
Your beast Reminds me of the guy that had his head sat on by an elephant. And the name is cool with its intertwined meaning and jibberish.
I had a couple characters with names like that for a project, but the names proved to confusing for the audience when I pitched my story. There names where Athrium Extor and Biblicus Scullus. Also, too conterovercial. I changed the names to Arthur and Big Book of Knowledge. hehe![]()
-britt
cool creature design man, i can really see the bulk and mass of its body.
Soooo, still kicking some mayor ass he
good work all around, every time I feel lack
of inspiration I drop by around here and
I got recharged.
Keep on doing the portrait digital studies
I can see your are getting a more solid aproach
to faces cause you been analizing how they work.
other than, than DAM! your color is really cool.
bw are ya going to Prague? just wondering
you gonna have to draw sumthting in my SBK bro.
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