a mission gone wrong.

**Chuck,mate.** · March 10th, 2005, 07:41 PM

ho, no.

photoshop 7.0

**cthomp** · March 10th, 2005, 07:49 PM

The body seems really long. Besides that it is good.

**Chuck,mate.** · March 11th, 2005, 04:44 AM

well i think the design of his suit
makes is upper body seem longer.
and maybe i just draw him this way...
anyway thank you for the comment.

**Form** · March 11th, 2005, 05:37 AM

when my eye is on the focus, out of the corner of my eye it looks like hes being anal penetrated!! cool pic

**dogfood** · March 11th, 2005, 09:13 AM

Actually, the long body comes from the foreshortening of the upper torso. We're seeing a part of the back and still all of the lower torso. That's a long body.

**-kube-** · March 11th, 2005, 10:31 AM

I like this a lot. Nice color scheme, and I like the contrast of the smoke of the fallen partner. This tells a nice story.
I like the proportions. It goes along with you style very well.

**Chuck,mate.** · March 13th, 2005, 06:37 AM

dogfood - i guess you`re right.
kube - cheers man.
form - you`re an idiot.

**Form** · March 13th, 2005, 06:46 AM

haha! WHAT? its true!! did you have to line the laser beam up right with his ass?? Ok ok ill let that one slide...

on a more helpful note

-speculars are distracting in the pectoralis/shoulder areas, perhaps tone them down JUST slightly.

- The specular lines on the river are at a distracting angle to the horizon line. Perhaps they would technically appear like this?? But you may want to use some artistic license here.

- I really like the composition, and the colours, and i really enjoy the directional strokework in the smoke cloud where it meets the man. Details like that can sometimes make a piece.

Hehe, not just a one track mind. I guess at first, the presumed anal situation just made me want to..... chuck, mate?

(i think ive reached an ALL TIME LOW)

Cheers