The Magician

[Captain Awesome]

Just a character for something I'm working on...I was thinking he should have more veins and color variation on the lobe. other crits are welcome please.

[Captain Awesome]

come on people

[Goog]

since its such a big head maybe make a device that holds it up?

[Captain Awesome]

well the idea was that he constantly needs new spines because they keep breaking, so he steals them from people.

[Goog]

Maybe put a surgical mask splattered with blood on his forehead then?

[Dutch Badass]

I would go for the machine holding up the head idea

much more believable then stealing spines because they break

[0kelvin]

Haha, that stealing spines thing is pretty funny.

I think adding more veins and colour variation (maybe some bruises, I'm sure he's always bumping it into things) to the head would help.

Good character, I like it.



0kelvin

[jogen13]

i would agree use a machine to hold his head up, i like the blood spatter!

[wazzup]

hey look i found my uncle ... id put blood on his gloves.. yeah and machine to hold up his head like a flying disk that surrounds it ?? but go with what u like awsome drawing

[D0Z3R]

Pretty good design, though I personnally would make the spine thing actually noticable, like mabey a bigger spine sticking out of his back and slightly surrounding his lobe. Good job

[Captain Awesome]

That's great. Thanks guys. I like all those ideas and will probably add some of them in when I get the time.

I'm not exactly going for realism with the whole idea though, dutch. In fact, one of the other characters is a young boy who can float because he has a pocket of compressed helium in his chest cavity.

[D0Z3R]

Ya... people sucking the helium outta those balloons is becoming an epidemic...

[BMunchausen]

He looks very closely related to this character from Nightmare Before Christmas - just with a bigger head.
http://www.treasurekingdom.com/miva/...kelsteinaa.jpg

[Scubasteve]

He looks like a mad scientist to me, not a magician. I like it though.