Have Wings Will Fly -WIP-

[skullsquid]

Teh randomness.
Full digital this time.
Any suggestions for the bg appreciated.
C&c welcome.
EDIT: ok fixed a couple of things.

[Interceptor]

I'm not entirely sure what you'll be working on next in this pic, but here is what I see.

1)Her sunglasses don't look right. The one lens that you can see goes into territory on the opposite side of her nose.

2) Her right breasticle (our left) is larger than the other.

3)There's nice detail everywhere but the pants.

I like the pic though. She have a very cool style..

[skullsquid]

As you may have noticed the pants lack detail because its a WIP, so I haven't been able to get there yet.
As for the rest yeah I see those things, I'll address them as I go.
Thanks for the feedback.

[endercoskun]

i liked the colors a lot. orange works very nicely with the grays.

two things to say as crit. in addition to what interceptor said:
one is her hands need a bit more work. give her more slender fingers i'd say. and second her right hand and wrist doesn't follow the same perspective with the forearm.

nicely done rendering, and interesting tatoo

[plsangel]

love the tatoos on her stomach...the cuff on her left arm is a bit more flared than on the right...also her top seems to be reflecting a lot of light...it looks almost like a rubber shirt around her breasts...which is actually pretty hot..but then there are some cotton-like wrinkles on her upper arm and elbow...

I really like her design...I look forward to seeing updates

[dannE-B]

i think a nice Bar setting for the background would look cool..or a dark club ...really love the pic, i wish i could use photoshop like you.

[skullsquid]

Its not photoshop, its painter 8, I only use PS for color correction and such.

[dannE-B]

oo righty...ive never used Painter

[skullsquid]

Psangel Nylon can have both wrinkles and reflections but ya I admit it im guilty of going reflection crazy for no reason lol.

[BMunchausen]

It's a good start, but vinyl or not, the fabric wouldn't be glued to her collar bones the way it is here. Those bones are way too pronounced in my view, like she has pits around her neck. I'm also not sure even a rubber shirt would cling to her breasts all the way around - seems like it would have to stretch some, between her breasts and her ribcage.

What bothers me most is I'm not feeling the twist in her body is very believable. Her breasts are frontal, her abdomen is to the side, and her groin and legs are frontal again. That's looking a little strange.

I agree about needing more elegant fingers, and I don't think the glasses are sitting right on her face.

[Skulldog]

Maybe it's just me, but that hair is way bright, so much so that it distracts from the rest of the colors. I want that orange top to be the focal point, but her hair jumps even more, being it's the darkest dark and lightest light in one spot.

[Telekon]

Also, something about the shape of the cut away material exposing her breast doesn't seem right. The curvature of the material on the top inner breast area seems unatural. Some other things to think about: What's keeping her breast from falling out? Is there a reason clothing designers design clothes in the manner they do? Is the overt exposure of breast really as sexy as a more subtle exposure. It was Mies Van Der Rohe who stated "Less is More."

Personally, I'm starting to understand that drawing is more than just putting lines on a piece of paper and hoping they fall correctly into place. I think that's what most tend to do. The more thought I put into about what's actually happening regarding the subject I'm drawing, the better the results.

[pissant]

Despite this being a month old, I may as well throw in my two pence, so, erm...what happened to her ribcage? It just goes straight up from the hips. Interesting garment design too.