First Post....some comic

[Hayabusa]

well, i'm new around here. I didn't know where to put this, so I'll just stick it here, because i know it has quite a few mistakes and what not, so its pretty beginner like. I draw mostly for fun and to kill time. I have gotten around to doing some real art, like drawing still life or doing a study here and there, but never really committed 100% of my time and effort to it. Anyways, heres a short story/comic im doing for fun. It'll be posted on a website sort of like a webcomic. I know theres things i did badly on this, and the next few pages that come will be done better and more correctly.
It was coloured in photoshop real fast like, because I wanted to have it done real soon so it can go online.
yep thats about it

[look]

Its nice coloring for a quick job.
Only thing I'd change coloring wise is the blood, it's a little too bright and red, compare with the overal coloring mood.
The character faces don't look so good, some of them are a bit skewed, some are a little leaning too much to one side. A lot of the errors can be spotted if you flip the image horizontally.