Last edited by HEROIC; November 20th, 2005 at 07:53 PM.
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arright, , GOt alittle bit UPSET about PORTFOLIO dAY"""
SO, GOt HOme, and told myself,, i HAVE TO GET INTOOO ANIMATIONNN![]()
And, did some works-->
all s.ps
Marley marley, marley marley, thx man, THANKs for the books. thx for the comment, sometimes, these little " kind words " or comments, or "PUSH" or Kicks work out reallyyy good.
ill start my tensed work from next week. i mean MORE TENSED THAN THIS. just check out how many pages i do everyday.![]()
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MoRe COmiNG Up TMr, AFTER SKooL yay
EDIT: ill call THis THreAD HEROIC FacTOry From NOW On, Cuase Ill BE In ALl My DrawIngs,, TAking a role, a HEROIC in them. boyaaaaa, in ur faces.:p/ arroght, time for me to try , see if i can draw moreee O_O
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Dude I told you already, dont get discouraged, the animation guy was being an asshole not wanting to look at your sb!
Keep at it! The life drawings keep getting better and better, and so does your line and value work! Dig the sp's in this update.
You haven't done PS stuff in a while, come on man, get back into colour, too!
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I agree...don't give in, just keep at it...and try to stay loose, and achieve a quality of line. Once you get the hang of it you'll feel so relieved you put in all that effort. [And especially don't listen to anyone who just blazes you...always strive to understand why someone crits your work, and listen to what they have to say...but most of all understand that there is only you who knows how you can draw, and how you can move forward!] Jeez I sound like Yoda
Here's something I found today and is worth checking out [if you haven't already]... http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=30205
Some good exercises to try are what Feng does...just draw lines and circles freehand. Dot...dot...then connect the dots. Also just draw stick figures [in proportion obviously] but in differing gestures or poses....then begin filling them out. Anything to move you towards that understanding. Because like all artists you are trying to get to that point when it all becomes instinctual...second nature...and that doesn't come unless you draw and learn...draw and learn...draw and learn. Once in awhile take a step back and critique what you have done, try to find what isn't working and then learn how to develop that, then move on. But keep practicing the new things you learn and don't relax into thinking you know how to do that now....you always need to practice, you always need to ask why something works...or why something isn't working. Trust me, when you see all this cool stuff, and amazing artwork...don't think for a minute that these people don't begin a drawing without worrying, or have times were they just can't get it and so-on. Because all of those artists out there suffer just the same as everyone else. If someone could just do a shit hot pic from scratch with no warm up, no prior involvement, and have it there ding dang do...they must be either a robot, or not normal [no disrespect to Autistic sauvant or anyone else who can do this but may have some social disorder etc]. A couple of weeks ago I asked some advice from a professional designer about digital painting...his stuff was amazing, and in amongst all his valuable advice was a sentence which read...'Keep drawing because there isn't a day goes by where I'm sat sweating infront of a piece of paper wondering how the hell to draw, or half way through something and thinking this just doesn't look right'. Sound advice, it re-assured me as I think that way everytime I pick up a pencil
Frank Frazetta has some great stuff you could look at his gestures, especially B/W...I think you kind find most ofhis pics on the net now [but would recommend anyone to buy at least one of his books].
Again, awesome stuff...keep it up. And take pride in the fact that all these great people are giving you advice.
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Don't be TENSE!! Be LOOSE and Flowing...RELAX and let the pencil just flow around the page, don't force yourself to draw, it should be something you do in a relaxed frame of mind. You'll acheive more being relaxed.Originally Posted by HEROIC
good stuff you got here, the lifedrawings are very nice, dynamic line and good expression, keep it on ....
.....you got time for another OC tomorrow? ;-)
Good stuff HEROIC, these studies are comming along nice
Keep an eye for the overall proportions, sometimes the features are too short or the head too big, like in scan00462iq.jpg, the legs are kinda short.
But overall very nice! you're doing great! I really like scan00654ju.jpg for example. Just watch those proportions
Cheers, keep it up
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Heroic, thx for visiting my SB man. Your advices werent harsh at all, I think people need those type of advices. I can see fast progress in your SB, the church is cool, n the idea of the guy drawing with a gun pointing on his head is wicked (dunno if is you or not).
Yeah, Ive just been doing some studies and sketches from photos, I should do some life drawing. Maybe when I go back home, cause now im in UK, and is damn freezing here!
Ill keep an eye on your thread.8)
arrightm srry couldnt update the s.b for couple days . Had a couple tests and important shits for skool to do.. didnt have time :/
okkk, less start by some 45 sec drawing at life drwaing class shall we.??.-->>
and some sketches in skool-->
some from imagination-->>
and a couple i spent my time to do for character designing which again is dissapointing,, but am trying to get it running before this weekend. Me and sirgreensock will be goin to SHeridan college to check out the place-ther is an open house- so i wanna get done some stuff im not sure and ask them.
NEONE ELSE GOING TO SHERIDAN??
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SIr GREEEEN - thx budhe was really an ass, well MORE DRWAING AND PRACTISING FOR ME, and more chop chop for me.
and moree cHOpCHoP FOr U TOooo![]()
Marley- THnak u very much sir, really appriciated for ur time and advices, i will for sure check out those artist, and yaaaah, i knoww that ANd ya i ckecked that forum before long time ago though :p. but thxx again, that Chris J. Anderson! is awesome.
well more *CHOP CHOP* for me, but no tense,, lotssa fun
thx buddy
PetePARKER- always ready to oc man, thx for kind words, and visitin my s.b
bRØk3n_sPiRiT- YESS SIR, ~~ i always get distracted by the butts ;p. ( female's butts )
jks ;p. Yes ive got to be crefull with my life drawings too. thankii u.
jtheanswer- THank u for visiting man
ill be keepin an eye on ur s,b too. GIVE OUT MOREE STUFF. ur stuff are good, PRODUCEEEE O_O moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..
*CHOP CHOP*
some oc stuff we did 2 days ago.
i know it sucks, well it was my 2nd time using oc, hard to control the brusehd, but FUNNN
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some i did for tonight
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those are cool sketches but the last one is insanely bright
arright, some paintings i did at skool,
better to put it this way,
MY FIRST PAINTINGS EVER
these are the size of news prints.
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I would suggest going back to the basics, it's extremely important that you study perspective, Niccolaides' "The natural way to draw" may also be helpful. It's important that you have several ways to analyze a subject, right now these all look like very fast copies. What matters is understanding what you draw, not line quality or how you hold your pencil. I'll post a link to some Glenn Villpu exercises later, right now my computer's going stupid slow.
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"Beliefs are rules for action"
"Knowledge is proven in action."
"It's use is it's meaning."
here's the link to villpu lessons
http://mag.awn.com/index.php?ltype=C...lppu&offset=10
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"Beliefs are rules for action"
"Knowledge is proven in action."
"It's use is it's meaning."
I just checked the image sizes on some of these pics, 1 and 2 megs for f***in line drawings, seriously, compress the file size.
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"Beliefs are rules for action"
"Knowledge is proven in action."
"It's use is it's meaning."
shit your right it has been loooong since I checked by, good greif you've improved! Do you see that line change only on your last page - compare with the first one!
A tip, that I'm after at the moment as well, there's a book by Taschen called Illustration Now! it's around 40€ - but I'm sure it's worth it - to see what the pros are doing at the moment - not that you can't see it here on the website anyway, but it inspires me for line quality and image settings...
bring it on - you're getting where!
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wow. definate improvement. although it has been a really big improvement from the 1st post, just keep practicing the basic anatomy, body and face.... doing good.. keep it up! your improvement is inspirational =)
armando- Thank u very muchi surely will reasing those tutors. ive checked it out, and it seemed pretty cool. and i think its worth puttin time for that.
osgoon- THx for visiting, yes. i surelly need some anatomy, and yaa :/ my faces sux , but am workin on it.thx for visiting
Imageproof- OMG, look at this guy, longggg time no seeeeee =p hows it goin?? i dont see much of updated from ur s,b brotha. WHATTT THE HELL ARE U DOINGGGG THEREEE>??
i gotta check that Taschen's book, thx alot
and aaaa, am a bit lazyy to scan, and no hope in scannin it all looks filthy and bad, :/ but im playin around with the levels in p.s , so it looks funny =p
i did this page an hour ago, before sleep WoRK. O_o
well, ill scan the rest lataaa ;p ciao ciao
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hihihiii,,
woopsy, long time no updates. arright arright, dont kill me, i start my first update by some skool drawings.
( my girl friend aslept on my lap, and i drew hershhh)
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some drawing we did on newsprint paper, O_o in my skool life drwaing class.
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the exercises are very consistant, and seem to be paying off in the long run. your pages of various objects is where i would take some attention to. the perspective of the objects on the floor are way off, to where they look flat and with out a 3-d form (video game controller, shair, etc...) try setting up a measured guideline, and pinpointing everything by three seperatepoints against that line, regardless of where the subject is on the paper. this should help you get that extra body you want for proper shading and to make your objects seem more real. cheers and look forward to seeing your future endeavors.
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This batch looks great, I really like the last life drawing you did.
Why haven't you scanned/posted the stuff from yesterday? You did some great lifedrawing then, too.
I also like what you did in the last update, the hatching following the form looks good!
life drawings me and sirgreensock did yesterday,
(i know the right thigh is abit short ^^)
(screwd up left hand, but i like the pose.
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Heey! Good update, i like the way you were handling the ballpoint pen.
The second one is my favorite, you got a lot of motion and weight going on there!
You had better come to the sketch group tomorrow, you hear?
Oh, and the guy in the first drawing, his thigh is too short.![]()
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LONG TIME NO UPDATED O_O
im sorry?? >< thats not an excues, i was sick, and i was really hating myself for drawing like a little pieca crap, but i had that doing 1 page in mind, even that it looked like a pieca shit, but still :/ i wanted to draw,, EVERYYYTHING
i cant upload all the stuff, cause today is my skool concert, and i dont have time, but ill just throw these grey paper drawing, or wtvr the paper is called, i dont know ;p
this is my first drawing with white pencil ^^
my second ^^
third in Sience Centre, BODYSHOW 2
and these two i did at the back of my sketchbook ,
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aye aye ayee, MORE updatesss. --> O_O
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Heiipld:
srry, yaaah, ive been lazy to scan stuff, even to come to concept art. :/
u can punish me if u want. WEll, here we go with these new stuff i did over the this time.
some of the ink works ive done on paper. ;D FUN STUFF
ill post more soon :/
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Yes!! Finally you've updated!
Man, Im so proud of seeing all the drive, work and learning youve been doing in person. You've come a long way, really tightened up, gotten serious and are producing some downright awesome work.
I know youve got a lot more youre not posting dude, subway sketches? That one of your room? Come on man, dont hold back!
As I told you, your hatching is really improving. Right now, especially with the marker and pen ones, make sure you follow the shape of the form along with the hatching to create more volume. You're paying attention to the value, but not the form that causes it.
Hopefully this means more regular updates from you, Im looking forward to that!
great progression on this sketchbook, your rendering has really improved, still nice attention to line weight, and its good to see you try new media.. keep drawing & posting
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Thx Sir Sock
Really appreciate it.
ChromaticCodex- thx for visiting, yup i like workin with new medias. , AND YES im posting more, so keep and eye ;p
some sps i did over OC
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