Hi IllustriousHarry, I like your thunderdome entry. It has a real sense of scale and humour - in fact, this is exactly how I feel when I come on this forum and look around the 'Finally Finished' section
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As for crit: It's a shame your digital entry didn't turn out - if you're feeling brave maybe you could post it and people can help you to see where it went wrong?
The composition of the pencil drawing is pretty strong, though the ceiling under the lightning is a bare - not really defined enough - you could add chandeliers or wooden beams or smaller arches (like the ceiling is ribbed?). Also add a bottom to the top of the doorframe (like you have done on the lightning bolt part) to give a third dimension. P.S. I don’t think the doors can close - you may have to move up the lightning bolt? I think this drawing could look even better if you colour it. It may help to colour an image you are confident that works already? Both your Michelangelo studies look great, and I hope you can apply these studies to your own life drawing.
Last edited by Pupil; March 27th, 2005 at 09:26 PM.
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