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    WW Pin-up please, tear me apart

    Not sure if portfolio worth, be cruel to me and I'll thank you for it! also help with the lower part, I have 0 idea of how to carry on.

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    I think it looks awesome so far. She's coming off a bit short right now though, largely due to the size of the head and thickness of the torso compared to the length of the figure. As for the hands, legs, and feet - shoot a reference photo.

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    Are you working with reference, looks pretty good so far, I'd say continue to define shapes, edges, and details.

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    Nice study--I like the color and the overall tone-- but, to be blunt, you really really really really need to find a reference photo for the final. There's just way too much about her pose and musculature that's either indistinct or wrong. (It's not a matter of making simple "tweaks," either...her entire body from the waist down is just...WTF? right now. There are millions of pictures online of female bodybuilders in that exact pose--find some.)

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    Colors look pretty good, but I agree, get some reference. Or better yet find a friend who looks like Wonder Woman and shoot your own
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