Jungle Fun

[Gragg]

Photoshop CS5
About 7 hours
This one was just for fun/practice

Let me know what you think, thanks for viewing!

[FightingSeraph]

I like your usage of color and atmosphere.

[walnut]

OMG camel toe!


No, but seriously,my main crit here's the unequal rendering: there's some too much in place like
The eyes and the folds (those look a bit off btw) and some too little in the background foliage and with
The linework that's still visible. You could work on that to make it really good, now it's a little too close but
no cigar for me. But: nice colour an lighting and the pose looks right too. Maybe the left thigh's thicker
than the other.

[Frida Bergholtz]

Try squinting your eyes and look at her silhouette without all the details distracting. That should make it clear to you that her proportions are off. Especially her head is way to large. I also think that you could have made the picture a little more interesting than a random girl posing in a bikini in a jungle. Try to give her a story and some character.

[Waipunga]

Its fun. I like it.
Keep at it man, you are on the right track.