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    A piece I'm proud of, critiques are more than welcome.

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    When I started this, I honestly had no idea what I was going to do with it. It went from a triangle to a diamond and many other things, but I settled with the shape it has now. I knew for one thing that I wanted it to have some sort of cloud affiliation, and the way that it just came together one by one as I moved along felt great. In all of my graphic design projects that I've done, this is the one I'm most proud of. I present to you, 'Ascension'.

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    I like it! Maybe center the text with the left/right corners of the diamond and add a little black above and below? Just style preferences really though, it looks great
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    I like it, with the color inverted too. Did you try any additional colors other then the text outline? Also asymmetric composition is fun, would be interesting to see what you could do with the same objects in a new orientation.

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    Have you tried playing with a different balance? Like MactaSuperColor suggested, you could play with moving the diamond around and putting the type in different areas. Just a thought, it could be interesting or it could be really dumb but you might want to check it out! Other wise I like the imagery and the type you've chosen, it goes well together!

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