Hey! I agree with StressCavity

I would also like to add that line weight is important

Try varying your brush sizes from time to time. This makes the drawing seem less "stiff." Another thing you might want to do would be to use the technique, but draw from your mind. This will strengthen what you copied. I am already seeing a massive improvement from your first few uploads and I strongly encourage you to continue uploading every day no matter what quality your work is! Its what I do and it allows you to see your previous work and the improvements you've made! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DUDE! Bai! :3
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