
Originally Posted by
rajeshB
Hi!
I'm new here too. Your drawings are pretty solid, but the thing that seems odd to me is how 'stiff' they feel. The expressions in the faces seem unnatural (on the two with the dude from Bleach) considering the actions going on in them. The timing also feels oddly slow in them.
On the other hand, the rocket launcher one is really good, timing wise, but the motion still feels a bit mechanical...everything moves too perfectly, too robotic. More like they're animatronics doing those movements rather than people.
May I recommend acting out and video taping those actions then rotoscoping them? You'll find a range of movements, poses, and expressions you never expected to find and it'll lend a bit more naturalness to your movements.
I know rotoscoping gets a bad name, and I'm not suggesting do that for all work or finished work, but as a means of discovery and study, it's priceless.
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