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    Futuristic city approach shot - need feedback

    Hello. just posting this for any tips or comments. It is still in progress. As far as detail, one can work on these things forever.

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    Mmm. I like it! it has a retro feeling, like from a 50's sci-fi magazine. Cool.
    I think you could use more texture in the base of the mountain.

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    Bad ass stuff. The only thing i think it needs is some shafts of light coming from the light source. Especially passing behind that rock on the left lighting up that landing area as well. Try using some bigger cloud formation too if this city is in high elevation.

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    I could so see this as a cover of an old paperback sci-fi novel! One of the ones you buy because of the cool cover...

    Put some glowy junk behind the spaceship to show movement. That's all i see worng.

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    i like the atmosphere... maybe try to sharp your edges
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