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    personal artwork

    hello!

    I've just joined the CA a few days ago... so I hape to get some good critique from you

    UPDATED with new project


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    Last edited by evoart; May 16th, 2013 at 07:39 AM.

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    Wow awesome work!
    I love the details on his face and the colours too.Try to make a darker background and make the lights stronger.

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    Good work always gets good critique, welcome to the boards!

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    I meant that every critique is a good critique if you can take it that way. it's not that I want only "GOOD" critique. and thank you

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    I really enjoy the creativity in this evoart.

    I say start a Sketchbook here and let it inspire you to create these monsters on a daily basis!

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    I will try... thanks

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    This one is awesome, I really like the concept and the painting by itself. Memento is right, start a sketchbook or post more! That way we can give you more in depth critiques on your body of work : )

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    Wow! Incredible detailing. To me the human part of the face looks a little bit odd - it seems like the skin ought to reflect some more of the yellow/orange hues surrounding it; it just seems a little flatter/less real than the mutated portion, which contains a much wider variety of colors in its shading, or even compared to the fleshy jaw-section directly above it, which contains hints of pink and orange.

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    Awesome!

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    I feel like I saw a much much less cropped version of this around and liked it better.

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    Great work man! Very inspiring with all the details and loose brush strokes! I love this style!
    How much time did it take?

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    yes I can see that now. thank you

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pavel Sokov View Post
    I feel like I saw a much much less cropped version of this around and liked it better.
    yes there is a uncropped version. but I liked this a little bit more. maybe I post the full image later. thanks

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    thank you. I did it between work so can't really tell you how long but because of all the details and its not even the full image it must have been more than 15h

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    older work but I kind of like it so I wanted to poste it here. looking forward for some critique.

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    Crazy! The first one shows some good skills in color saturation, and pushing the saturation where the light hits, while subduing planes that face away.

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    You have a great grasp on the use of color! Major props to you, your work is very eye-catching and fun to look at!

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    I really like the design of that top image. Perhaps if you pushed the values more, it would really pop. I love the colors, but it feels just a little flat. Great brush strokes.
    My portfolio

    Would you like to see my drawr-rings?

    Will design for food, provided that we all agree that money is edible.

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    concept of an alien which I did for my school project.

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    First from five characters for a project I'm working on.
    The story takes place on mars in not that far future...
    I will post the version with helmet in couple of days probably.

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