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    Red face Ohai c: My artwork.

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    SO! This is my pretty recent sketch of a random girl off google (lol, I literally typed in "face" ) and I want to know what you guys think of it


    -Love, Ameera.

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    I really like the way it's painted, however, the proportions are not correct. The main problem (and a very common one) is the eyes being much too big and consequently too close together. If you compare them closely with your reference, you will notice that your drawing's eyes are almost as wide as the nose and ears are long and almost exactly as wide as the mouth - in the photo they are at least a third smaller. A good rule of thumb to remember is that there should be room for one more eye between the eyes, and about half an eye on either side of the face - making the face four eyes wide, like this: http://media.herald-dispatch.com/blo...ram-763522.jpg

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    Thank you so much, that was really helpful. I'll remember your words next time I produce another drawing/painting!

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