(**Side Tracked, Interested in finishing **)

[Rhoshone]

Just started sketching this goofing off while taking a break from my side comic book project.

Open palette, 1 layer, Mouse. (My tablet is broken )

I have a lot of rendering to do on the whole doodle, Most of what I worked on is just a color test.


Any Suggestions / Commentary is welcome.

[Marcky Marq]

I would say push your idea farther and give us a new one right now it is very hard to read what is going on, I dont know what orientation that is supposed to be, right now it looks like it could be 3 different oens with your black lined frame and that is making my brain hurt.

Push it farther, clean it up so we can get more of an idea of what you are trying to create here

Also order a new stylus, mouse work is horrendously painful, I just shattered my pen and had to get a new one too

[skvetchy]

Maybe unifying the major light source? There is a sun in the back but then everything is lit from the front. Also like Marcky Marq said it is kind of hard to see what is going on, are they coming out of the painting? The composition seems pretty straight-on and awkward as well all the strange empty yellow space I'm not sure is supposed to be a room or a compositional element.

And like Marcky Marq said, please get your tablet fixed, it will save you much pain, good luck!