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    2nd painting, feedback please

    This is my second painting I've done with my tablet, Any insight to help me improve? PLease, I can use it.


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    any crits? I need help adding texture

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    Hm. I think the lack of crits might be...are you aiming for accurate anatomy, or do you mean to go highly stylized? If you want an accurate, realistic portrait, than it has anatomy issues. On the other hand, it's looking a lot like a mask -- like those ebony carvings from Africa -- and it's hard to critique stylization.
    I was once on the receiving end of a critique so savagely nasty, I marched straight out of class to the office and changed my major (sketchbook).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stoat View Post
    Hm. I think the lack of crits might be...are you aiming for accurate anatomy, or do you mean to go highly stylized? If you want an accurate, realistic portrait, than it has anatomy issues. On the other hand, it's looking a lot like a mask -- like those ebony carvings from Africa -- and it's hard to critique stylization.
    Yeah its heavy stylized. I wasnt going for realistic, but I think it has some blending issues and texture. I struggle with anatomy and proportions, so thats why i tend to add my own little spazazz to things to cover up for it :/

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