WW1/Dinosaur mashup portfolio

[scrt_AgentMan]

I decided to try working on an artcenter type entrance portfolio. I don't really plan on attending but I thought it would be fun to work on. My idea for a story is dinosaurs as weapons during world war 1. I still working on the story of why the dinosaurs are in the 1900s. The human dinosaur interaction is in the style of Dino Riders. Also Dinotopia was an inspiration.

These are my first 2 pages I've finished. Any feedback on the design or layout of the page plus suggestions to improve are welcome.
I'll try to add more pages as I finish them.

[LuisSalazar]

Looks cool

[scrt_AgentMan]

[Aether Technician]

Very interesting designs!
The linework and rendering could use some work...but the presentation is so good it almost doesn't matter.

[eru]

Drawings look really good man and presentation well presented. I don't know if the drawings need to be cleaned up because this kind of work looks like its ment to show working in progress rather then fine details. And it looks like you know a lot of stuff too which is good!

[Linnaeus]

I would love to see gas masks for the dinos.

[Linnaeus]

Nice to see the perspective grids.

[jackthesketcher]

I can see this actually being a series or comic its funny you did this mashup i did one of a t-rex in a stealth bomber but amazing work man!
http://www.flickr.com/photos/jackthesketcher/

[Linnaeus]

I like the fun of the concept itself. I like dinos and I could see a bunch of Brits using them on the battlefield. The carnivores would be good for cleaning up battlefields.