Sup broskis.
Halloween Pre-sketch.
(Zombies vs. Big mutant guy thing whatever thing)
1:
2: Just considering values
Critiques appreciated.
..and hate comments. Whatever floats your boat.
King of the Hill
Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
Critique Wanted
Sup broskis.
Halloween Pre-sketch.
(Zombies vs. Big mutant guy thing whatever thing)
1:
2: Just considering values
Critiques appreciated.
..and hate comments. Whatever floats your boat.
Last edited by Rischmidt; October 27th, 2012 at 09:57 AM.
Sticks Like Grim Death
Level 17 Gladiator: Spartacus' Dimachaeri
Not much sense of vs. here. Everybody's just standing around. Do more thumbnails. Lots more.
Tristan Elwell
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Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
Completely agree with Elwell it feels flat and boring needs to be more dynamic. why is a zombie hanging? If you want to have that element keep in mind that traditional zombies are not dead until the brain has been destroyed so even if he was hanging he would be thrashing. Also those zombies seem pretty healthy standing up straight with bulky muscles- think about making them grosser and droopier. That is just a design element to consider.
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King of the Hill
Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
Hah, my friendly-looking zombies. They do look extremely dull & harmless. Thanks. Noted; Depth, more dynamic, zombie-ish posing, more dead-looking. Got it!
Last edited by Rischmidt; October 27th, 2012 at 04:35 PM.
Don't embrace the past
Level 4 Gladiator: Meridiani
I like the colouring, looks neat. Buuut I don't really understand whats going on, in all honesty. I'm sure that everyone else has pointed this out and will help you
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