Promo Designs for Metal Band CD Release - Would Love Some Crits

[Damien Levs]

Hi,
I have been working on some promo posters for a Metal Band's CD Release. I want to keep things nice and clear and easy to read. comments and crits are appreciated.

[kirubeen]

I'm guessing this is for a black metal band right? Anyway, I'd say these work well enough, just maybe consider your spacing and composition in the last one. I get that you're trying to go for a minimalist approach but your 'pre-order' line should be a bit better placed, maybe under the 'love of winter' line? With your first one as well, you have three elements of equal weight so it's hard to determine a focus point.

So far the third one works best for me as there's a clear hierarchy of visual elements so it's well balanced, although the small black text at the bottom gets kind of lost in the background a bit.

[Damien Levs]

emptybox Yes, that is correct. They are for a black metal band. Thanks so much for your constructive feedback and looking at it, you are right in the placement of that Pre Order. Also your right about that text getting lost in the one. I did indeed want a minimalist approach, keeping things, bold, clean and easy to read.

Many thanks!