Current high school portfolio (review and critiques much appreciated!)

[kwh c]

Hello and thank you for stopping by!
I'm currently a Grade 12 student in Canada and getting ready for post secondary. At the moment, I'm hoping to apply for the Fall terms of ACCD, LCAD, Capilano U.
This is my current portfolio, it still needs polishing but I was hoping I could hear any thoughts, feedback or critique on what I have so far before I go back into it, and also before National Portfolio Day which is coming up the after the next.

Any kind of feedback would be much appreciated! I would be grateful to hear what you think of it.
What do you think I should I work on, what should I consider taking out, adding in, etc?

[kwh c]

bump!!

[themegagod]

This looks really good imho. What are you looking to major in?

[Shorinji_Knight]

You're on the right track. I really like your wagon/alley study. I would encourage you to continue making studies like those. I see a lot of good ideas here and decent execution. Overall this portfolio looks pretty good, but I think you should consider adding a few more finished pieces, and removing some of the less polished work. It's good to see your process, but ultimately how you end a piece is more important.

[kwh c]

This looks really good imho. What are you looking to major in?

Thank you!
I'd like to do concept art.. so Entertainment Design is what I'm aiming for!

[Velocity Kendall]

Looking good, i pretty much agree with Shorinji, although I dont mind the current mix of finished and development stuff.
my nadvice is try and find the best entertainment design out there (syd mead, craig mullins are personal favourites, but whoever you think is really good,) and start figuring out how they do what they do.