Freeze !!!

[dood]

hi folks !

here is my last painting... as usual kick my ass !!

[dood]

a bit better now i think...

[dood]

with a rabbit...

[scrt_AgentMan]

I really like the last on with the rabbit. A couple things I noticed were the dots on his chest aren't symetrical. It looks like you have blue reflected light hitting one leg but not the other. His gun has no magazine (unless its supposed to be like that).

[dood]

yeah the rabbit makes all of it... thanks for your suggestions. i'll correcte those details and post the final i think

[manlybrian]

I thiiiiink the left leg is longer than the right leg, seeing as how both feet are resting flat on the ground. At that angle I think the left heel would be raised up? I could be wrong.

[dood]

ha ! this exacly the kind of issues i need to work on... i find it so difficult to put well the body on the ground. Just to be sure, you'r talking about the character's right leg, on the left of the picture don't you ?

[dood]

here is the corrected version :
- chess spots
- gun magazine
- bleu reflect on the legs
- reduced his right leg

and several other few details...

Thanks again, so helpfull !!!

[manlybrian]

Sorry, I'm not sure if I explained well. I'm not sure if this paintover explains well either, but we'll see.

[LightandDark]

Um, Am I the only one that see a major problem with how the cloth in the pants is rendered?
Not only is it hard to tell where you put the knee joint it , look at the crotch area...

Concept:
Also he is wearing next to nothing summer football armor ala Brink but his pants are thick-military issue-winter-pants that will sure to give him some nasty jock-itch in warm weather so whats the story there?
(or he ends up catching a cold or frost bites on his Torso?)

[Zelrik]

It might have been stated in other comments but I think the position of the light source is not consistent comparing the pants with the helmet, or am I wrong?

[element1988]

finger off the trigger? hes gunna hurt himself.