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    Home!

    Hi,
    It's been a while, I have not been creating for a while due to other responsibilities and a medical issue, but I am back with this...

    My first peace called home, inspired by a project my sister is in the process of completing...

    Critiques are more than welcome and hope you like.....
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    Hi there,
    Sorry to hear about your medical issue, hope you are doing fine.
    Nice work, cool fire horse, could be developed a bit more (how about fire coming out of the horse tail etc.etc.etc)

    Tschussy tschuss
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    the lava is nicely done!
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    sorry to hear about your medical problems.. here is hoping that they go away .. asap !!!
    and i like this over all.. but it can be much more.. like there are too many dark parts.. and the silhouette of the horse is a bit too simple, try bouncing the light around.. and try giving the horse a dynamic figure (muscled, long haired, slightly posed)

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    Thank you subvicto , all is good now thanks.

    I did think about the fiery tail and tried it a little but found it rather distracting, I thought the Lava pool and the red eyes served to draw the eye to the horse quite well. I felt that if I go any further I might ruin it.

    I may be wrong and I may try it again, thanks for the tip and and the compliments.
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    Thanks mehran,

    I take your point with the dark patches I will be touching it up over the next few days...

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    You have came along way your work is getting alot more solid.
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    Thank you Stryno , Much appreciated...

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    Wild! Nice work.
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    Than you Jeff Lafferty

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