
Originally Posted by
Fantastico
Hey, just passing by and wanted to share my thoughts on your work. I can see great improvement from your first page trough (at the moment) your last. And I always love to see improvement in my fellow artist, so keep it up. What I can see (and maybe I'm wrong) is hesitation and maybe fear in your work. What I mean by that is that your lines are stiff. Loosen your arm, make it flow, do not be afraid to make mistakes, make a lot of lines and in all that mess you will see ones that work best for your piece. As time pass and you make many of your pieces you would need less and less lines to make correct ones. When I draw traditionaly I like to use H5 pencil and make very light sketch of the form, posture and few details. Then I use HB pencil to thicken and correct my sketch beneath.
So, hope this helps and I wish you best in your learning.
Cheers.
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