monologish - I would suggest having the evil lady's head be positioned above the grieving woman and looking down at her, at least to some extent. This could help give the evil lady a sense of dominance or power, and break any confusion as to their relationship. Just a thought.
IntoTheVoid - Have you tried a lower camera angle? Forcing the view to look up at the villain could help give him/her a sense of power. If the villain and the screen behind him/her are the focal point, have you considered making them dominate the composition in size?
warburton - Looking good. I don't mind all the armor detail stuffs.