I am 24 years old and I've taken some art classes at the community college and now I'm looking to get a little more serious as an artist. Please, feel free to critique.
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I am 24 years old and I've taken some art classes at the community college and now I'm looking to get a little more serious as an artist. Please, feel free to critique.
Hey, hey Apple!
Last edited by Wilson38115; March 4th, 2012 at 10:00 AM.
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I'm starting to get a handle on this tablet thing
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might do an animation with this toon.
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Hey Wilson, You need to work on your line control. They seem very scratchy and hesitant. Great start, keep drawing!
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Fill a single sketch book(100 Sheets) with just Heads, Torsos, Hands, Feet,Full Body, or Still Life.
Set two: Static Pose, Active Pose, Gesture, Drapery/Clothes, Squash and Stretch, Expressions, Age, Skeletal, Still Life
Set three: Dog/Cat, Horse, Fish, Birds, Wild Beasts, Fantasy, Zoo, Still Life
Set four: Master Copy, Landscape, Architecture, Still Life
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It's a good start
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That's a good painting you have there. The neck length are a bit off (as well as a few smaller things), but that's easily fixable and forgivable. Your grasp of lighting is quite good, especially on her right (our left) side of the body.
Practice cleaner lines in your sketches, as well. A solid foundation is helps with the creative process.
And welcome to CA.org. Learn well.
Sidenote: Have you done any reading outside of what your college instructors have tasked you to? CA.org has a great list/section 'bout it.
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@ ArtsySiridean Yes I completely agree, I learned how fundamental drawing was when I took my first painting class.
I'm doing research on gestures for animation and i would like to put that knowledge into my figure paintings. I've read "Drawing on the Right side of the Brain" by Betty Edwards and I'm about to start "The Natural Way to Draw" by Kimon Nicolaides and "Gesture Drawing for Animation" by Walt Stanchfield.
I will definitely checkout the CA list.
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Last edited by Wilson38115; March 8th, 2012 at 04:51 PM. Reason: update
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Hopefully with enough practice the ring width will get smaller.
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These are painful to look at
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Last edited by Wilson38115; March 10th, 2012 at 07:29 PM. Reason: update
No man who values originality will ever be original. But try to tell the truth as you see it, try to do any bit of work as well as it can be done for the work's sake, and what men call originality will come unsought." - C.S. Lewis
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No man who values originality will ever be original. But try to tell the truth as you see it, try to do any bit of work as well as it can be done for the work's sake, and what men call originality will come unsought." - C.S. Lewis
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wanted to push the values a little more
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