Jerm's Portfolio

[jeremymoore]

Here's some stuff I worked on during the last year. I'm wanting to tweak a few things on some pieces before showing them at SPECTRUM LIVE this May. Any help would be appreciated.

[Hitsu//San]

I think your work is great. If you want to tweak something just go for level adjustment and add a little more contrast to be a little more eyecatching. If you're searching for a specific level of improvement i think you can already tell where's the direction you want to take your artwork. Tell us and we can discuss about

[J Wilson]

Looks good! The one with the umbrella and park bench I think would be grounded better with a stronger shadow. The girl and the bench are kinda floating at the moment.

The cemetery piece, I think you could get more punch with the glowing object if you darkened the bottom half of the image a little more. Maybe darken the foreground tree as well.

Otherwise pretty cool work.

[CarstenJ]

Hi,

I like them, very good artworks. But the girl in the bathtub is sitting a little too low I think, unless the tub is getting into the basing.

[DeJakhalz]

Very clean and well made illustrations. But to me, they look a bit on the safe side. I think you could test yourself even more by trying some more outragious illustrations. Some of them also look a bit like you used photos for them...

But as I said, very well done illustrations.